This is still hot but unless I missed it did the earplugs get in jj s ears And is Alex somehow programmed too

This is getting good. I'm so glad Alex has turned J.J. into a bully ! This is just what I was hoping for...I hope over the next few day's he becomes more & more cruel to his brother the queer...Now that he's gay, this behavior should really turn him on. I'm also glad he's now in love with Alex..[here's hoping Alex changes the mom & dad so that they also 'admire' him & consider him one of the family...the son they wish they had had :strong, manly [& in their eyes, not the faggot both their son's had become]..The father should really bond with Alex, but he should be re-educated to become a cruel homo-hating, hard drinking, dirty talking[even women hating] 'real-man', proud of his gym toned body, showing it off in tight cloths..always calling attention to his big dick,etc. Even though the father no longer shows her any affection, the mother should 'worship' him for his 'manliness', the crueler he is the more she likes him, but she can no longer stand her two son's because they are faggot's: to her, the lowest of the low. Little does she know that Alex has turned her macho husband into a closet homo ! No one in the house should be awaire of the 're-educator, no longer knowing what it can or has done....Now that Jake no longer knows he invented it, it's time to 'dumb him down a little, [the smart brother becoming the slightly low i.q. boy who has trouble remembering 'stuff', but is perfectly happy being "the dumb one" He should rely on his one true friend Alex to make up his mind for him. Also he should become more & more 'self-hating' knowing that he is a filthy queer & deserves to be treated as one !......I still think it would be fun, if J.J.'s going to be gay, but 'butch' to make the younger brother the complete steriotype of a 'sissy' faggot..make him believe that he has always been bullyed by everyone for the way he is & has always been : limp wristed, lisping, mincing, panty wearing..ashamed of his 'little' pee pee, [which he considers more of a clit]....all features which would make his father hate him more, but with re-education he would feel were his natural way..... Then you could get into the way's the family dynamic would start to change: nude behavior , public jacking off & cock sucking around the house, lots of drinking & swearing & general crude behavior, the complete oposite of their former church going/god fearing behavior!! & all of it directed by Alex !...As you can tell, I'm really into this story & hope it continues for many chapters, but close toghther...CAN'T WAIT !!!!

But ya read Chapter 3 to see what happens, so I've obviously done something right :P

Gotta admit, after the fabulous build up of chapter 1, the wonderful entry into Jake's personal life - chapter 2 is really upsetting and is a total turn off. Brainy though he may be, Jake wasn't smart enough to turn Alex into a living vegetable who's constantly in pain and whose only escape will be a well-deserved suicide.

I'm a little blown away by it myself! It's been a little pet project for about a month but didn't really think about submitting it until a few days ago when my buddy told me he liked it a lot. I'll keep focused and work on this one...and, no worries, I have plans for the ending :P

wow,when i read chapter one this is not how i expected this top go,but this is so hot,keep going please :)

Lucky Paul were can I find such a man to serve?

so great

I've never seen such a reaction to a story before...everyone wants a happy ending, me too, but wow, you really captured the audience

I would prefer to have already the chapter 3 with lots of grammatical mistakes than waiting this long :) You can do as many authors here do that they upload later on a "revised" version of the story.. and everyone will be happy :D