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Trylithin
11/24/15, 1:55 PM
This is really sweet, in a dark, twisted sort of way. I loved it.
JasCo
11/24/15, 12:32 PM
I'd also suggest this would be great turned into an episodic series of scenes at a porn studio like Men.com. They are currently doing one based on a cult so this would be quite hot, though it would need to be shortened to fit a scene I guess.
JasCo
11/24/15, 12:26 PM
Oh and I love how the hypnotism kinda makes the boys think they giving in and actually choosing to like what is happening rather than their will just being taken suddenly from them.
JasCo
11/24/15, 12:25 PM
So glad there is another chapter finally; it has bee one of my favourite stories on the site.
Anonymous
11/24/15, 10:10 AM
Awesome and hot story! Can't wait for the next part!
Anonymous
11/24/15, 9:23 AM
Moar please, this is one of the best stories read in a while
Titan
11/24/15, 5:40 AM
Wow! Great addition Ruffcub. Thank you for continuing it. We are all guilty of not adding to stories or even completing them, me for one but this shows we are all holding out for continuations of existing stories. Please continue!!!
Anonymous
11/24/15, 4:00 AM
Awesome... i actually like how he's aware of what's going on but powerless to resist. I hope he spends a lot of time worshipping his father's feet, and vice versa.
Anonymous
11/24/15, 3:41 AM
What a fabulous brainwash scene! I love how Dan struggles and how it's such a nice long extended scene! -- and someday I hope you return for the conclusion of the best story on this site, "Bargain"!
autoDream
11/24/15, 1:00 AM
I've definitely considered how to best bring out the hypnotist thoughts in the story, but I haven't found a way that I am comfortable with yet. By default, i try to keep things pretty loose, in away to let the reader better fill in certain details for themselves so that they better fit in the world. In one of my stories I kind of came close to a way of going about it, where I switch the directive once Jese slips under. We get his side of things until *PING* "The boy was all mine, I could see his last thought disappear as I ordered him to sleep..." I'd probably have to introduce that in a spin off though as to not confuse things on the Island. My next writting will probably be something random, and I could easily see such a technique work.