Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/11/15, 4:38 PM
Or Troy is actually Max's contender
Anonymous
11/11/15, 4:38 PM
I can't wait to read more and see Rob brought low!!
Anonymous
11/11/15, 6:51 AM
Great story, I love that we dont have to wait so long for a new chapter
Anonymous
11/11/15, 4:05 AM
Loving this story. Thanks for writing.
Anonymous
11/11/15, 2:31 AM
the story is amazing. Love the incest concept with Hank and his two muscular boys. Hope to read about Troy's downfall in the next part
Anonymous
11/11/15, 2:30 AM
I love the Bubble concept, but this is really confusing to read without some way to differentiate between the two perspectives since it switched between the two characters both speaking in the first person. If the uploading format allows italics, maybe do that next time to show when you switch. It's well-written otherwise, and I look forward to more from you.
Anonymous
11/11/15, 1:52 AM
Yes really good start and better than before. It will be even better if Rob now be doing chores as a Janitor in his nice expensive suits that used to portray him as a star attorney lawyer. It will be cool if he is ordered to grovel and crawl around the office in his fine clothes which used to demand respect and authority. Maybe making him really feel like Junior by bending him over his desk in what used to be his office. Totally breaking his pride and former arrogant self in the process... That would be a very nice read. Thanks for your efforts. You first attempt in mind control storytelling is fantastic.
sweatnosis
11/11/15, 1:47 AM
Oh fuck yes! Gym motivation mp3s, pushed workouts, gear fetish(!), instilled adoration, maybe a hint of D/s role switching to come...? And it's a cool bonus that I could actually be this guy, minus the suit job. Fuck knows I've got my guys to watch at the gym. Not that anyone's offered a playlist, haha. Please, keep pushing hard with this story!
Anonymous
11/10/15, 8:19 PM
Yes, yes! Keep up the great work. In time, even the uncle and grandpa will join the greater cause :D
jake fox
11/10/15, 7:55 PM
Thank you I was hoping it would be better, and I knew I had spelled pendulum wrong, sometimes I'm unsure of the correct spelling even when it's right in front of me lol, thank you for the correct spelling as I'm sure I will need it again as my story progresses :-) I hope it didn't spoil your enjoyment to much