Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/11/15, 1:52 AM
Yes really good start and better than before. It will be even better if Rob now be doing chores as a Janitor in his nice expensive suits that used to portray him as a star attorney lawyer. It will be cool if he is ordered to grovel and crawl around the office in his fine clothes which used to demand respect and authority. Maybe making him really feel like Junior by bending him over his desk in what used to be his office. Totally breaking his pride and former arrogant self in the process... That would be a very nice read. Thanks for your efforts. You first attempt in mind control storytelling is fantastic.
sweatnosis
11/11/15, 1:47 AM
Oh fuck yes! Gym motivation mp3s, pushed workouts, gear fetish(!), instilled adoration, maybe a hint of D/s role switching to come...? And it's a cool bonus that I could actually be this guy, minus the suit job. Fuck knows I've got my guys to watch at the gym. Not that anyone's offered a playlist, haha. Please, keep pushing hard with this story!
Anonymous
11/10/15, 8:19 PM
Yes, yes! Keep up the great work. In time, even the uncle and grandpa will join the greater cause :D
jake fox
11/10/15, 7:55 PM
Thank you I was hoping it would be better, and I knew I had spelled pendulum wrong, sometimes I'm unsure of the correct spelling even when it's right in front of me lol, thank you for the correct spelling as I'm sure I will need it again as my story progresses :-) I hope it didn't spoil your enjoyment to much
dougkent60
11/10/15, 7:29 PM
a great resubmit and looking good, but may I suggest the use of the spellgchecker Pensilum=pendulum
Kka
11/10/15, 7:21 PM
So f**king hot! This was perfect!
the suitedsubmissive
11/10/15, 7:08 PM
VERY great rework! Love that there's a little more background. Cannot wait to read more!
jake fox
11/10/15, 4:46 PM
Thank you all for your comments, I have taken advice and have 're-written the story starting from a new beginning but will come to the same conclusion I had originally envisioned. I hope you all enjoy the revised story
Anonymous
11/10/15, 4:38 PM
Please continue. I Love the humiliation Rob is undergoing and hope for much more. I do agree that it might be moving a bit fast, though. I'd love to see him humiliated in his fine suit at the office, like the poster below mentioned! Either way, great start.
Anonymous
11/10/15, 3:00 PM
This is not copyright to Erik the Ready