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The Syrme
11/8/15, 3:11 PM
Glad you liked it!!!
Oct 7, 2015
Anonymous
11/8/15, 1:13 PM
Dude please tell me there's a part 2
Anonymous
11/8/15, 10:48 AM
An excellent concept. I loved the idea of cumming once he let go of thinking and will. That letting go and cumming as a sign of submission. Well done.
Hyphap
11/8/15, 7:13 AM
Also, the title was reminiscent of the chorus of David Bowie's "Cracked Actor", which meant that 1) I had that song running through my head while I read it and 2) I could imagine Bowie as the man. All to the good.
Axel
11/8/15, 3:41 AM
Woo your back! Loved this xhapter and how the Reverend planted seeds in brodys dads head now coach needs to force them to grow making dad strip down and maybe even make brody go nude. I can see brody and his dad hanging out and doing somethibg like bonding through wrestling. Then brody throws a boner and his dads finds out forcing him to his room for a good spanking infront of the Webcam. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Axel
11/8/15, 3:38 AM
Great chapter! This is now one of my favorite series here! I cant wait to see what master has planned next for his two puppets. I can see him making the two compete for his attention. Looking forward to the next one!
Anonymous
11/8/15, 2:42 AM
wonderful. please flesh this out
Nesto Riviera
11/7/15, 2:01 PM
Thanks for your comments. It's just an idea. I really appreciate if someone want to team up with me. So we can improve this story (and maybe make more) If any interested please write to nestoriviera@hotmail.com
Anonymous
11/7/15, 12:12 PM
Shame that it had to go the incest route. It was hot until then.