Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/30/15, 1:58 PM
The father needs to fuck the son - unknowingly. Dress Brody up in a wig and have Coach egg on the drunk dad to fuck "her" up the ass to prevent pregnancy.
Anonymous
10/30/15, 11:48 AM
SOOOO good. Post more! We're a generous, forgiving audience who'd rather be turned on than wait for perfection!
Cliff
10/30/15, 11:45 AM
Like the story, although it's a bit of confused about nowadays and past, but definitely a well-written rare story type.
Anonymous
10/30/15, 6:56 AM
This is just sooooo awesome!
TimNJ
10/30/15, 4:34 AM
Oh yes, the father needs to be totally corrupted!
scudder
10/30/15, 3:25 AM
You've got in these 4 chapters a very interesting story, potentially a lot of sexy fun, with some unique twists. However, in several places it's really hard to follow either as erotica and especially if it's stroke fic. I suspect you've been influenced by "American Horror Story" and the Brannagh movie "Dead Again"! I hope you'll go back, edit it and decide what you want it to be, but I'm very happy you did post a complete story.
Anonymous
10/30/15, 12:12 AM
Would be really good to see Brody's father fall under the effect of the drugs and becoming the coach's pet.
Kk
10/29/15, 7:26 PM
Yes a happy ending. We get so few of those. Thank you for this and I hope to hear more from you
Anonymous
10/29/15, 2:32 PM
Glad you wrote a new chapter - wonderful!
JD
10/29/15, 3:30 AM
Welcome back! I didn't even read it yet, getting to that, but I want to thank u for continuing the story.