Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/31/15, 1:18 AM
I'm glad you continued the story! I didn't enjoy this part as much, the reverend is my least favorite character -- just doesn't turn me on when he does things with Brody. But I'm looking forward to the next installment!
MonsterMash62
10/30/15, 4:54 PM
I love this story. Especially the parts with Kevin.
MonsterMash62
10/30/15, 4:46 PM
This was one hot story. The switch over is nice and slow, from both perspectives. Adding in the other guy becoming a Butler towards the end was also a really nice addition.
Anonymous
10/30/15, 1:58 PM
The father needs to fuck the son - unknowingly. Dress Brody up in a wig and have Coach egg on the drunk dad to fuck "her" up the ass to prevent pregnancy.
Anonymous
10/30/15, 11:48 AM
SOOOO good. Post more! We're a generous, forgiving audience who'd rather be turned on than wait for perfection!
Cliff
10/30/15, 11:45 AM
Like the story, although it's a bit of confused about nowadays and past, but definitely a well-written rare story type.
Anonymous
10/30/15, 6:56 AM
This is just sooooo awesome!
TimNJ
10/30/15, 4:34 AM
Oh yes, the father needs to be totally corrupted!
scudder
10/30/15, 3:25 AM
You've got in these 4 chapters a very interesting story, potentially a lot of sexy fun, with some unique twists. However, in several places it's really hard to follow either as erotica and especially if it's stroke fic. I suspect you've been influenced by "American Horror Story" and the Brannagh movie "Dead Again"! I hope you'll go back, edit it and decide what you want it to be, but I'm very happy you did post a complete story.
Anonymous
10/30/15, 12:12 AM
Would be really good to see Brody's father fall under the effect of the drugs and becoming the coach's pet.