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Anonymous
8/9/24, 3:29 PM
Very hot.
8/9/24, 3:15 PM
I am digging this story, thanks for sharing it
8/9/24, 3:14 PM
I will vote for change the location
8/9/24, 2:05 PM
You have to do more. Very hot
8/9/24, 2:04 PM
Love you posting some more! I think the changing location makes a lot of sense and curious how that would play out
Elthorian
8/9/24, 2:00 PM
This was so insanely hot thanks for the amazing read.
Deep
8/8/24, 6:30 PM
It's been more than a year... MORE THAN A YEAR I SAY!!! This had been my fav story in this site do far, all with the lore and kinks and romance. I NEED this, i am addicted to this as much as Allan got addicted to Xander's precum.... i need to see how it ends, the lore and all.... do you understand my desperation?? Please come back to this as soon as u can

8/8/24, 6:38 PM
@Deep Sorry to leave you waiting. I have been working on this story from let's call it another angle. I don't think anyone is quite figured out yet but eventually it will all make sense. In the next part Xander's father finally makes an appearance, and then many pieces will fall into place.

Deep
8/9/24, 8:07 AM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Well good things take time... so as much as I wanna get to the next part as soon as possible, take ur time and deliver another banger like u always do!

Deep
8/9/24, 8:09 AM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Btw i was gonna follow ur recommendation and take a look at Fracture: Physical.. but i couldn't find it on this site

8/9/24, 1:57 PM
@Deep It's here: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10006938 You can also click on my name to go to my author profile, and then on that page there's a link that says list of all of Nocturne 13's stories.
Vince
8/9/24, 1:25 PM
Checking in on this gem?
8/9/24, 1:11 PM
God i fucking love this series! The concept is so fun!
Anonymous
8/9/24, 12:16 PM
Really liking this so far. The set up and world building definitely pays off in this chapter. I love that the magic is both epic and powerful, yet hilariously bureaucratic, close to how one may think at first, yet perfectly not *quite* the way it may seem, right down to the particulars. It's funny, and yet when it's hot, it's hot. The transformation scene is great in all the best ways for this site, it's so easy to see how it'll change them in more ways than they may have guessed. I love the tease at the end, can't wait to find out how much Connor loves what will happen to him, and am fascinated to see how things will go for Kyle. Thanks for sharing!