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Oct 5, 2015
Anonymous
10/6/15, 2:28 PM
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Oct 5, 2015
MalSkin
10/6/15, 11:38 AM
Great story thanks for posting it - love transformation stories turning guys into what they despise. (Shot my load while reading it) I have one similar to that on my tumblr blog. I hope we can read more stories like this from you. Again thanks for taking the time to write it.
Oct 5, 2015
Anonymous
10/6/15, 10:24 AM
Interesting. Could have used proofreading and empty lines after paragraphs. Two serious suspension of disbelief issues: The smart wealthy Adonis spends his time working in a clothes store? The guru of brainwashing spends his time being a chav? Neither is story-breaking, but they could have used a few lines of explanation.
Oct 5, 2015
Anonymous
10/6/15, 7:10 AM
"He had become the thing he despised more than anything." Me, too.
Nov 27, 2014
Anonymous
10/6/15, 2:54 AM
Would love to find this store
Anonymous
10/5/15, 4:03 PM
i cant wait for chapter 3
Cliff
10/5/15, 3:09 PM
I‘m wordless...never predict an ending like this. Poor Dare. Not my taste, but it is believable. Well done!
Anonymous
10/4/15, 9:24 PM
Wonderfully written story, but after all the build up, I don't believe for a second in Kyle's conversion. You make him too sympathetic, eliciting our empathy which conversely makes Cade seem like a horrible person at all times. All the tattooing, piercing, and sex acts should be hot - and they're not, they seem more like torture because they're told from Kyle's point of view. Some people are just not into fetishism and Kyle seems to be the exemplar of that. Making him change his mind at the end seems very hollow and forced. (That's the main issue; I'm one of those who find smoking repulsive in every way.)
Anonymous
10/4/15, 6:54 PM
God I want more of this
Mar 19, 2013
Anonymous
10/4/15, 4:24 AM
Oh my! Awesome story! More please!