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Cliff
10/5/15, 3:09 PM
I‘m wordless...never predict an ending like this. Poor Dare. Not my taste, but it is believable. Well done!
Anonymous
10/4/15, 9:24 PM
Wonderfully written story, but after all the build up, I don't believe for a second in Kyle's conversion. You make him too sympathetic, eliciting our empathy which conversely makes Cade seem like a horrible person at all times. All the tattooing, piercing, and sex acts should be hot - and they're not, they seem more like torture because they're told from Kyle's point of view. Some people are just not into fetishism and Kyle seems to be the exemplar of that. Making him change his mind at the end seems very hollow and forced. (That's the main issue; I'm one of those who find smoking repulsive in every way.)
Anonymous
10/4/15, 6:54 PM
God I want more of this
Mar 19, 2013
Anonymous
10/4/15, 4:24 AM
Oh my! Awesome story! More please!
Anonymous
10/3/15, 8:10 PM
loved the story....
Rick
10/3/15, 7:22 PM
I thought you were going to have them drain Neils cock before going to bed. Or one rimming Neil and the other taking Neils cock until it explodes. And while all this is going on having their sub conious start admire ring men only. Getting turned on by men's boots, butts and crotchesas a normal way of life. So at some point reverting them back but as a gay family of cock suckers, feet sniffers, and all turned on by their roommate Neil.
Anonymous
10/3/15, 9:30 AM
This was awesome :) do you think you'll write more? I hope so!
Anonymous
10/3/15, 7:23 AM
Damned hot. I'm in SG and this is one of my fantasies.
Anonymous
10/3/15, 12:58 AM
Great concept, I love ethnic stuff. But next time go further with it :P
Anonymous
10/2/15, 5:23 PM
that was a waste of my time reading it please no more trivia