Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/2/15, 1:48 AM
Awesome!
Anonymous
10/1/15, 9:20 PM
The clue is in the title: a bogan is an unsophisticated / redneck Australian. You may as well complain about a hillbilly being stereotyped
Anonymous
10/1/15, 6:52 PM
Not offended, but if I would want to be, I'd find the American guy a horrible 'ugly American' stereotype. Then again, this sets the reader up with glee and anticipation at his fate.
Anonymous
10/1/15, 6:29 PM
Poor grammar. Too many stereotypes. It looks like you had a harder time learning the English language than you did finding out about Aussies. Us Aussies aren't all illiterate bushmen and blokes you know.
Anonymous
10/1/15, 5:15 PM
Hope we see an update to this soon!
Anonymous
10/1/15, 3:45 PM
Wow!!!!
Anonymous
10/1/15, 3:40 PM
This is pretty awesome. I like the sons dominance of the father and how its growing. The subliminal tapes are pretty cool and interesting. Our main guy, the son, could clearly get a harem if he wanted to. Hehe
Anonymous
10/1/15, 2:57 PM
This could have been good. As it was, it is in serious need of proofreading. Writing on a phone is as much an excuse for lack of effort as the closet door being closed is excuse for wearing a Hawaiian shirt to a funeral.
Anonymous
10/1/15, 2:54 PM
Meh...
Mar 12, 2015
Rick
10/1/15, 7:17 AM
Where's part 2. I wish the stories were real sometimes and there was mp3files like the one in the story