Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/1/15, 1:41 AM
If you ever chatted with Aussies you'll know they have a helluva lot more colloquial terms (unrecognizable to more monolingual Americans). I suggest you have a couple of conversations with Aussies, then redo the story (the poor grammar really makes reading difficult) and incorporate all the new words you discover to change the protagonist in order to round out his profile.
Kk
9/30/15, 9:35 PM
This is a fun story, thank you for posting. I'm glad to actually see new content here for once!
Anonymous
9/30/15, 7:29 PM
Nicely done
Anonymous
9/30/15, 3:53 PM
SOOOOOO HOTTTTTTTT! Please give us MORE!
Anonymous
9/30/15, 7:40 AM
Awesome story!!
Anonymous
9/30/15, 4:55 AM
Great story!
Anonymous
9/30/15, 3:10 AM
rubbrsome is one of the best authors on this site. Thanks for the reminder of this wonderful story. Now to the same author's "Brain Feed"...
Anonymous
9/30/15, 2:55 AM
Oof -- a classic. Burned myself out on it or something before, but then it sprang to mind tonight and glad it did.
Anonymous
9/29/15, 7:51 PM
Wasn't there a part 4?
Anonymous
9/29/15, 12:27 PM
Awesome!