Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/27/15, 2:35 AM
More!
Anonymous
9/26/15, 10:07 PM
Always loved this story!! I sent you an e-mail, but not sure if you got it!!! Will we see appearance of Jockboy!!!!
Anonymous
9/26/15, 2:32 PM
i loved this story back on the old site too. Glad to have it up! We need more feet stuff!
tattcub
9/25/15, 5:30 PM
Thanks for this one. It's been a while since a decent dumbing down transformation story appeared. You might just get me writing again. Cheers.
Anonymous
9/25/15, 5:16 PM
Incomprehensible. Got tired of trying to figure out what and who was who by the 5th line. Consider an editor and resubmit.
Anonymous
9/25/15, 3:56 PM
Awesome stories!!!
Anonymous
9/25/15, 7:49 AM
This story seems pretty good. I am the polar opposite of a grammar snob. My usual motto is "If I can understand whats you mean without needing to think about it then its correct". The problem is that even if I think about it, some of your sentences are incomprehensible. There is a lot of dialogue that is difficult to attribute to a specific character. If English is not your first language or you just moved this from some archive without any formatting than I will give it a passing grade. But in any other circumstances I would suggest teaming up with another author like the other anon suggested.
Anonymous
9/25/15, 2:56 AM
This story needs serious editing. Consider teaming up with another author
Anonymous
9/25/15, 2:26 AM
Love the controlled super hero stories.. Please more.....
Anonymous
9/25/15, 12:26 AM
Still chuckling at Mom! laughed out loud at that one! Love to have more of anything that you write. Love your style! Thanks