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boyn2changes
9/23/15, 9:58 PM
Wow - another awesome story Trylithin! I had to hold myself back from cumming at least 3 times so I could finish reading it in one go! ;) Among all, "Dumbing Down" is my favorite subgenre, especially when its done without the subject's consent, and the more they struggle with the changes the hotter it is. You did not disappoint - I'm really hoping we wont have to wait long for your next story/masterpiece!!!
Trylithin
9/23/15, 1:32 PM
Thanks, Monster! I'm a big fan of your stories - I'm really glad you enjoyed this one.
MonsterMash62
9/23/15, 12:58 PM
Another super hot story from you. I loved this one. Loved the slow growth and changes. Loved that he got what he asked for, and what he didn't know he wanted.
Anonymous
9/23/15, 8:10 AM
stiff dick induction hot as balls tho
Anonymous
9/23/15, 5:33 AM
This is so HOTTTT! Your attention to detail is flawless , please continue , I can't wait for chapter 6! I love where this is going.
Anonymous
9/23/15, 12:28 AM
im kinda hoping for other transformations, i felt the title would mean there would be a variety of transformations
Anonymous
9/22/15, 9:29 PM
Lots of fun! :)
Apr 26, 2015
Piper
9/22/15, 7:59 PM
I still really like this story and how the reality alterations occur and the bears that happen as an end result. I'm curious about the force causing this but also deeply amused. Thank you for writing this and putting it out there.
Piper
9/22/15, 7:58 PM
I remember this story from the Smoking Men's Collection and message board. I really enjoyed the ideas in the series and all the different parts. I also know how hard it is to write and how hard it can be to make a story like this. I really enjoyed this series for its cigar, bear stuff, and transformation elements. Still this really does suffer from formatting issues and it clearly needs an editor to clean up these problems which make legibility a serious issue for a fun story. Hope to see more of your work in the future!
Anonymous
9/22/15, 3:08 PM
This is super intense! I hope theres a 2nd part and more to it!