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Anonymous
9/25/15, 12:26 AM
Still chuckling at Mom! laughed out loud at that one! Love to have more of anything that you write. Love your style! Thanks
Dio
9/24/15, 8:22 PM
This is excellent! It really resonates; it's clear it exists for the transformative aspect, but it also feels like a short story in its own right, and the pacing was right on.
Anonymous
9/24/15, 4:13 PM
cool. Thanks for your super fast response. Having a powerful superhero totally helpless and vulnerable is just such a good read. I would be patiently wait here for the next update on the Colonel's inevitable humiliating predicaments. Your work and effort is so much appreciated. Thanks :)
koruichi
9/24/15, 4:05 PM
Captain Power is a copyrighted character, so to have the story on here, I made the change. :) The stiffening dick aspect of the induction is fun, I've used it myself, I'm glad you liked it, anon! There is likely going to be more, I have plans for the Colonel and another new superhero.
Anonymous
9/24/15, 2:19 PM
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Cliff
9/24/15, 11:45 AM
I like "Predictive Analytics" a little more, for the romantic vibe, but "Deconstruction" itself is an awesome transformation story! Would like to know something about the mysterious Martin.
Anonymous
9/24/15, 9:01 AM
Hi I loved the premise of this story since I first read it. The superhero from your previous post was named Captain instead of Colonel. Not quite sure why you changed the name. Any particular reason? Anyway I enjoyed it especially having the superhero totally clueless, unaware that he is even enslaved. Would really love to see a continuation of this story.
Ruffcub
9/24/15, 5:41 AM
Really hot but it's a shame it ended where it did. Hopefully there'll be more to follow.
boyn2changes
9/23/15, 9:58 PM
Wow - another awesome story Trylithin! I had to hold myself back from cumming at least 3 times so I could finish reading it in one go! ;) Among all, "Dumbing Down" is my favorite subgenre, especially when its done without the subject's consent, and the more they struggle with the changes the hotter it is. You did not disappoint - I'm really hoping we wont have to wait long for your next story/masterpiece!!!
Trylithin
9/23/15, 1:32 PM
Thanks, Monster! I'm a big fan of your stories - I'm really glad you enjoyed this one.