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Anonymous
9/20/15, 8:09 PM
I love this story so much! However i cant find part 1 and part 3, which annoys me so much!!!!!! Can someone repost it again please?
Anonymous
9/19/15, 5:23 PM
It would be great to hear the perspective of Shane as he worships the man who is giving him the pain in his genitalia. Wonderful addition to the beginning. You have about three or four sub plots all ready to flesh out in this story alone! Don't stop now!!
Anonymous
9/19/15, 2:46 AM
I kinda like that he just accepts his situation Can't wait for next chapter Dying too see how the associate plays into this
Anonymous
9/18/15, 9:49 PM
So hot please continue this immediately!
Anonymous
9/18/15, 2:09 AM
Very nice story! Pacing is good. I agree with the previous comment that Bryan's personality seems to evaporate too quickly. Personally, I love to see the guy struggle with the story's mind control aspects. But perhaps you can do something in the continuation - or when Bryan gets his own recruit.
blackshoteyes
9/18/15, 1:51 AM
i love this series. any other series that have the same genre like this? (straight being forced to enjoy)
Anonymous
9/17/15, 2:35 PM
Technically well written and the setup could lend itself to a good story, but to me this was a bit too straightforward. The main character is just clay in Alec's hands: that could be a good story in itself, but (again, in my opinion) then you should have made more of his helplessness and the ongoing changes instead of flatly narrating what Bryan is ok with this time.
Anonymous
9/17/15, 12:54 PM
more please
Anonymous
9/17/15, 10:16 AM
You can still go on ha. But why not try and tell the story from the slaves perspective? It's always hot seeing how someone copes with their new found purpose in life :)
Anonymous
9/17/15, 2:00 AM
Hope dare and Phil get it