Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/12/15, 3:05 PM
Rubbrsome that would be an awesome perspective to do the story from for a final chapter to the series
rubbrsome
9/12/15, 2:29 PM
On whether to continue the story, I'm about 50/50 split at this point. I thought about doing one more chapter from the perspective of a muscleman. And see how their minds are hijacked.
Nov 26, 2007
Anonymous
9/12/15, 1:48 PM
Thanks to whoever commented this and brought it to my attention. This was _evil_ and so _good_. :-)
Anonymous
9/12/15, 9:10 AM
Promising for a four part introduction and the setting has potential, but I don't understand why you post the story in small snippets.
Anonymous
9/12/15, 4:10 AM
yay! i was worried there would only ever be 1 chapter. more please!
Anonymous
9/12/15, 2:18 AM
Both installments 1 & 2 are simply establishing scenes. They're way too short, making this story seem like an unfair tease. (I can't stand anything having to do with cigarettes, but of course, to each his own.)
Anonymous
9/12/15, 2:05 AM
add more
Anonymous
9/12/15, 1:47 AM
I don't care what you've planned, the only ending I'd like is with that brat turned into a sex crazed slut for the interviewer
Anonymous
9/12/15, 1:06 AM
Bravo as usual, rubbrsome!!