Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/12/15, 4:36 PM
Singaporean guy here really enjoyed the read havent gotten a story in local context before. Keep writing ^^
Anonymous
9/12/15, 4:34 PM
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Anonymous
9/12/15, 4:34 PM
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Anonymous
9/12/15, 4:34 PM
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9/12/15, 4:33 PM
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blackvinyl4
9/12/15, 3:39 PM
Hot story...love the induction
Anonymous
9/12/15, 3:05 PM
Rubbrsome that would be an awesome perspective to do the story from for a final chapter to the series
rubbrsome
9/12/15, 2:29 PM
On whether to continue the story, I'm about 50/50 split at this point. I thought about doing one more chapter from the perspective of a muscleman. And see how their minds are hijacked.
Nov 26, 2007
Anonymous
9/12/15, 1:48 PM
Thanks to whoever commented this and brought it to my attention. This was _evil_ and so _good_. :-)
Anonymous
9/12/15, 9:10 AM
Promising for a four part introduction and the setting has potential, but I don't understand why you post the story in small snippets.