Recent Comments

8/8/24, 9:08 PM
I love a good, realistic induction story. It rides that line between consensual and nonconsensual, which (in a story, and in fantasies) makes it even hotter. I prefer piss kink to be "straight from the tap", myself, and I can't really grasp what the Master is getting out of the bedwetting, but I'm sure we'll see. That last scene does leave things open for a shift in perspective, to read about what's going through James's mind about the whole experience (I enjoy the rationalizations and the discovery of new feelings very much), but so far there haven't been any concrete suggestions beyond dropping into trance, feeling safe and aroused, and the Good Boy triggers. Nothing that James would even necessarily be consciously aware of. So I imagine it would be better to keep things from the tist's perspective until that changes. Great job! I'm looking forward to more.
8/8/24, 8:49 PM
Giving this story another bump.
Art
8/8/24, 6:34 PM
Love this story and the build up. Dr. getting all the info from his stud patient. Now to use him and get the room-mates as well. Would have liked the tech in the office to have been a he; he could really be the Dr's. assistant?
Anonymous
8/8/24, 6:02 PM
What a rude comment from the person above. don't know if this author used AI or not, but I found the story readable and enjoyable, and I'm sorry someone who didn't like it felt the need to insult it anonymously.

8/8/24, 6:25 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! I appreciate that. I think this is the same person who comments on most of mine and other stories. I actually sometimes used some ai to review what I wrote for grammar and syntax and flow. I was conflicted, but my writing sucks. It's hard to write good hot stories with one hand ;)
8/8/24, 6:17 PM
It's so wonderful, I can feel the master's strong dominance and hypnotic power!
Art
8/8/24, 6:16 PM
Very slow and very methodical. Hope read the payoff in the next chapters. Don't care for water sports so that part didn't interest me.
Art
8/8/24, 6:01 PM
This was kinky and different, but no use was made of Superman once he was subdued.
8/8/24, 4:45 PM
I'd really like to see a follow-up. To see how the "new" man of steel enjoys his new "do" and his new masters, as he learns to assist in their work.