Recent Comments

Viridian
9/10/15, 4:35 PM
Nice and promising. My one complaint is that everything seems to be going too smoothly so far. Surely the unaffected are going to react somehow? What is happening outside the tri-state area? It's been a week. Divorce statistics have gone off the scale, leather sales are incredible and most men seem to be openly gay. These things are not possible to ignore. Also, what happens when people catch only a part of the broadcast or have the sound off or are only exposed to a broken image? (I'm not saying you should answer these questions, if you just want a fun and light story, but you clearly have the talent to expand the scope of the tale.)
Anonymous
9/10/15, 2:48 PM
The suspence of how this saga concludes is overwhelmin! Any chance of the remaining chapters being posted pleas?
Hyphap
9/10/15, 12:43 PM
Well that's hot as hell. Maybe not classically "mind control", but the descriptions put might right into the narrator's point of view--which turns out to be a very hot, and very dangerous, place to be. I can't wait to see how he continues to submit.
Anonymous
9/10/15, 4:36 AM
Nice second chapter. Looking forward to more "breaking installments."
Anonymous
9/10/15, 4:33 AM
This was quite a thrilling first chapter. I personally find inductions more stimulating than sex scenes, but I'm probably a minority. Can I ask why the leather addendum? I find that more intimidating than alluring, no offense.
Anonymous
9/10/15, 3:38 AM
Will there be a continuation to this hot story?
Anonymous
9/10/15, 3:01 AM
This is really great. I hope that the son doesn't find out too soon about his dad. I think that would add a little fun to it.
Anonymous
9/9/15, 10:33 PM
Goddamn, continue this please. Go through the lessons, and then by the end have the writer completely in his pocket, writing good PR for him just to every once in a while get dominated. Then at some point have a bunch of Reiber's entourage gangbang him as he slowly gets more and more addicted to being Reiber's pet
Anonymous
9/9/15, 10:24 PM
Great story. Definitely did not go how I expected, and had some great descriptions of his body.
Anonymous
9/9/15, 8:52 PM
thank you Master - a 57 yo piece of shit can only dream of becoming such a creature! rkglum@gmail.com