Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/11/15, 1:52 PM
Sure. Why is the world this way? Why isn't receiving a blowjob an infraction? What's the point of sexually frustrated students? (Other than it being hot, of course. If so, could you expand on that?) Also, considering the software is available free, there is no excuse for not spellchecking a story.
Guardsman
9/11/15, 1:38 PM
Should I Expand on this story?
Anonymous
9/11/15, 12:26 PM
Very promising. I'm probably in the minority, but to me the longer they're unaware, the better.
Anonymous
9/11/15, 12:07 PM
This is one of the hottest stories i have read in a while i am frantically waiting for the next chapter.
Anonymous
9/10/15, 9:50 PM
wow, usually im not into revenge fantasies, but for some reason i'd really like to see this kid knocked down a peg...
Anonymous
9/10/15, 9:13 PM
Some hypnosis would make this amazing.
Anonymous
9/10/15, 5:31 PM
I liked Winston. He's hardly a complex character (and the French is cliche), but his sense of style and the way he rearranged lives while fairly kindly dismissing a servant were a nice touch.
Viridian
9/10/15, 4:35 PM
Nice and promising. My one complaint is that everything seems to be going too smoothly so far. Surely the unaffected are going to react somehow? What is happening outside the tri-state area? It's been a week. Divorce statistics have gone off the scale, leather sales are incredible and most men seem to be openly gay. These things are not possible to ignore. Also, what happens when people catch only a part of the broadcast or have the sound off or are only exposed to a broken image? (I'm not saying you should answer these questions, if you just want a fun and light story, but you clearly have the talent to expand the scope of the tale.)
Anonymous
9/10/15, 2:48 PM
The suspence of how this saga concludes is overwhelmin! Any chance of the remaining chapters being posted pleas?
Hyphap
9/10/15, 12:43 PM
Well that's hot as hell. Maybe not classically "mind control", but the descriptions put might right into the narrator's point of view--which turns out to be a very hot, and very dangerous, place to be. I can't wait to see how he continues to submit.