Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/25/15, 2:56 AM
This story needs serious editing. Consider teaming up with another author
Anonymous
9/25/15, 2:26 AM
Love the controlled super hero stories.. Please more.....
Anonymous
9/25/15, 12:26 AM
Still chuckling at Mom! laughed out loud at that one! Love to have more of anything that you write. Love your style! Thanks
Dio
9/24/15, 8:22 PM
This is excellent! It really resonates; it's clear it exists for the transformative aspect, but it also feels like a short story in its own right, and the pacing was right on.
Anonymous
9/24/15, 4:13 PM
cool. Thanks for your super fast response. Having a powerful superhero totally helpless and vulnerable is just such a good read. I would be patiently wait here for the next update on the Colonel's inevitable humiliating predicaments. Your work and effort is so much appreciated. Thanks :)
koruichi
9/24/15, 4:05 PM
Captain Power is a copyrighted character, so to have the story on here, I made the change. :) The stiffening dick aspect of the induction is fun, I've used it myself, I'm glad you liked it, anon! There is likely going to be more, I have plans for the Colonel and another new superhero.
Anonymous
9/24/15, 2:19 PM
👍
Cliff
9/24/15, 11:45 AM
I like "Predictive Analytics" a little more, for the romantic vibe, but "Deconstruction" itself is an awesome transformation story! Would like to know something about the mysterious Martin.
Anonymous
9/24/15, 9:01 AM
Hi I loved the premise of this story since I first read it. The superhero from your previous post was named Captain instead of Colonel. Not quite sure why you changed the name. Any particular reason? Anyway I enjoyed it especially having the superhero totally clueless, unaware that he is even enslaved. Would really love to see a continuation of this story.
Ruffcub
9/24/15, 5:41 AM
Really hot but it's a shame it ended where it did. Hopefully there'll be more to follow.