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littletinytim20@gmail.com
12/10/15, 3:58 AM
This is getting good. I'm so glad Alex has turned J.J. into a bully ! This is just what I was hoping for...I hope over the next few day's he becomes more & more cruel to his brother the queer...Now that he's gay, this behavior should really turn him on. I'm also glad he's now in love with Alex..[here's hoping Alex changes the mom & dad so that they also 'admire' him & consider him one of the family...the son they wish they had had :strong, manly [& in their eyes, not the faggot both their son's had become]..The father should really bond with Alex, but he should be re-educated to become a cruel homo-hating, hard drinking, dirty talking[even women hating] 'real-man', proud of his gym toned body, showing it off in tight cloths..always calling attention to his big dick,etc. Even though the father no longer shows her any affection, the mother should 'worship' him for his 'manliness', the crueler he is the more she likes him, but she can no longer stand her two son's because they are faggot's: to her, the lowest of the low. Little does she know that Alex has turned her macho husband into a closet homo ! No one in the house should be awaire of the 're-educator, no longer knowing what it can or has done....Now that Jake no longer knows he invented it, it's time to 'dumb him down a little, [the smart brother becoming the slightly low i.q. boy who has trouble remembering 'stuff', but is perfectly happy being "the dumb one" He should rely on his one true friend Alex to make up his mind for him. Also he should become more & more 'self-hating' knowing that he is a filthy queer & deserves to be treated as one !......I still think it would be fun, if J.J.'s going to be gay, but 'butch' to make the younger brother the complete steriotype of a 'sissy' faggot..make him believe that he has always been bullyed by everyone for the way he is & has always been : limp wristed, lisping, mincing, panty wearing..ashamed of his 'little' pee pee, [which he considers more of a clit]....all features which would make his father hate him more, but with re-education he would feel were his natural way..... Then you could get into the way's the family dynamic would start to change: nude behavior , public jacking off & cock sucking around the house, lots of drinking & swearing & general crude behavior, the complete oposite of their former church going/god fearing behavior!! & all of it directed by Alex !...As you can tell, I'm really into this story & hope it continues for many chapters, but close toghther...CAN'T WAIT !!!!
EdIam
12/10/15, 3:53 AM
But ya read Chapter 3 to see what happens, so I've obviously done something right :P
Anonymous
12/10/15, 3:51 AM
Gotta admit, after the fabulous build up of chapter 1, the wonderful entry into Jake's personal life - chapter 2 is really upsetting and is a total turn off. Brainy though he may be, Jake wasn't smart enough to turn Alex into a living vegetable who's constantly in pain and whose only escape will be a well-deserved suicide.
EdIam
12/10/15, 2:58 AM
I'm a little blown away by it myself! It's been a little pet project for about a month but didn't really think about submitting it until a few days ago when my buddy told me he liked it a lot. I'll keep focused and work on this one...and, no worries, I have plans for the ending :P
Ethan
12/10/15, 2:37 AM
wow,when i read chapter one this is not how i expected this top go,but this is so hot,keep going please :)
alx62
12/10/15, 1:11 AM
Lucky Paul were can I find such a man to serve?
a1
12/10/15, 1:03 AM
so great
Anonymous
12/10/15, 1:00 AM
I've never seen such a reaction to a story before...everyone wants a happy ending, me too, but wow, you really captured the audience
Johan
12/9/15, 11:33 PM
I would prefer to have already the chapter 3 with lots of grammatical mistakes than waiting this long :) You can do as many authors here do that they upload later on a "revised" version of the story.. and everyone will be happy :D
littletinytim20@gmail.com
12/9/15, 11:15 PM
The most excitement I'v seen around a story in some time : Looks like there's room for many 'chapters' here..Can't wait to see how Alex changes J,J when he comes downstairs..[it's obvious from the way thing's are going that he's going to turn him gay], but wouldn't it be hot if instead of 'loving his younger brother Jake, as he had in the past, he now considers Alex, more like a brother, looks up to him, wants to be just like him...[& Alex reprograms J.J's mind] so he thinks he's always been a 'bully' to his younger brother, but more than this Eric should expect this kind of treatment, & feel he deserves it & craves it. As a matter of fact the whole family should 'look-down' on Eric, being ashamed of him, etc....Perhaps Eric should totally forget that he ever invented the re-educator at all. Alex could start to 'dumb-down' Eric & make him think he was never bright enough to have gone to college at all, instead he'd come home after being fired from his job as a janitor at the college, etc [???]....His family could even be re-programed to feel he was never their 'birth-son' at all, but a baby they had brought home from the shelter when his real mother a crack-whore couldn't take care of him...This would open up the door's to all kinds of 'hatred' & mistreatment on the part of his former Mother. Father & Brother !