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Anonymous
10/1/15, 3:45 PM
Wow!!!!
Anonymous
10/1/15, 3:40 PM
This is pretty awesome. I like the sons dominance of the father and how its growing. The subliminal tapes are pretty cool and interesting. Our main guy, the son, could clearly get a harem if he wanted to. Hehe
Anonymous
10/1/15, 2:57 PM
This could have been good. As it was, it is in serious need of proofreading. Writing on a phone is as much an excuse for lack of effort as the closet door being closed is excuse for wearing a Hawaiian shirt to a funeral.
Anonymous
10/1/15, 2:54 PM
Meh...
Mar 12, 2015
Rick
10/1/15, 7:17 AM
Where's part 2. I wish the stories were real sometimes and there was mp3files like the one in the story
Anonymous
10/1/15, 5:18 AM
One of my favorites! Please continue!
Anonymous
10/1/15, 3:20 AM
That was pretty hot and short. You should do a Canada one!
Anonymous
10/1/15, 2:43 AM
Interesting idea. I can see where this could have gone. I agree with some of the other comments and this could have easily been applied to other regions as well. Some frat brothers down in Mexico for spring break taking advantage of the "free" spirits end up going native. Some guys are taletelling Europe after high school and before college end up in Germany.
Anonymous
10/1/15, 1:56 AM
Very very nice. Smooth and thorough
Anonymous
10/1/15, 1:53 AM
Add some punctuation too. Preferably correct punctuation. Makes it easier to figure out what the sentences are trying to say.