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JX
8/3/24, 6:08 PM
Update this month?

8/5/24, 1:37 PM
@JX I’ll try but I can’t promise anything.
1976 colomberie shop
8/5/24, 1:00 PM
i had a very seductive experience in the channel isles on colomberie near howard davis park. while i tried trunks on the shop owner closed for lunch and when I came out he seduced me and had me on the shop floor, shop being closed for lunch. it was very enjoyable.
8/5/24, 12:58 PM
This was like toe-ta-lee great story! Thanks bro.
8/5/24, 7:08 AM
Leon's transformation is hot. If anything, I would like the see more of the description of his appearance before transformation. (or do you have any image in your mind?) Anyway, it's a great story as usual. Looking forward to see the further story. Thanks for your hard work. :)

Pcm
8/5/24, 8:08 AM
@[Dice](/user/show/75600) Thank you! Hope I live up to your expectation! I'm generally horrible at physical description, so I tens to avoid that. Leon is tall and broad-shouldered with short blond hair (like most characters in the Kingdom). He has shaved stubble. He does not have his knights' hulking stature, but makes up for it with his imperious, disciplined, and stern posture. He retains most of his body shapes after the corruption, but becoems obviously nore mascular and grows taller. His hair and stubble turn black, however.
8/5/24, 7:01 AM
Well this is even more sexy and hot then chapter 2. Which I like to go back to a lot of time. Can't wait to see what else The Chairman and brainpig will think of next. Theonly thing I wish was seeing a coach walk in on Malcolm and having their way with him. Other then that I'll still be cumming back to this one a few times.
8/5/24, 6:39 AM
I'm very much enjoying the story and the characters, but I find myself starting to skim sometimes. Seems to me that the writing could be tighter and there could be less repetition and excess verbiage. Even some of the dialogue seems too wordy to feel real. Maybe eventually another draft would be useful.
8/5/24, 5:58 AM
Mmmm lovely transformation
8/5/24, 4:39 AM
I just read the story so far, and it is GREAT!, as Tony the Tiger would say. I hope there will be more in the pipeline soon so we can keep our pipes cleaned out.:blush:
boi98229
8/4/24, 7:16 AM
This setup is such a hot tease!! The plot, the physical environment, and the character development are all super appealing. Offhand i have to say that Zed seems like the perfect roommate to me. Are you sure this story was entered in the right contest?! It's amazing that so much was said with so few words. I have a lot of questions about how Josh will get along with his new roommate, but my biggest question is, when will all the following chapters be coming? I want so much to mark this story as a big favorite, but i really want to know more before making that decision.

8/5/24, 2:41 AM
@boi98229 I'm working on the next chapter, but, like usual, I have to think about it for awhile. That's always been my process. I think through different scenarios, adding some things and discarding bits or even whole scenes. So I'll get there, but it won't be 'til after the contest closes. Yes, Zed does seem like the perfect roommate, one that many people would love to have. I have an idea of where I want Josh to end up, though, and he probably won't like it, at least not at first. I'm glad you've liked it so far and hope I can keep you entertained by Josh's journey.
8/5/24, 12:51 AM
Don’t want to ask for too much but shouldn’t Garrett want a full body wax and bleached blond hair? Maybe a nostril piercing or some lobe gauges? Maybe a belly button piercing? It’s all about looking sexy dude!

HypnoSub
8/5/24, 12:55 AM
@[Sub4Taylor](/user/show/2656113) You’re not asking for too much at all! These are some great ideas for a himbo transformation. I’ll keep them in mind for future stories 😉 Thanks for the comment!