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8/1/24, 6:05 AM
More of a romantic thriller and a,spicy 1 too Thsnjs

8/5/24, 6:17 PM
@[Darmani](/user/show/138470) Thanks. Originally wrote it as a hetero romance story and then edited it into an MC theme version both on literotica. I then modified it for Gay Spiral Stories. I must confess, this is my favorite story. I liked the happy ending
Markus Shmarkus Platypus
8/5/24, 6:14 PM
I vote gentle! Though I must ask, do you plan on continuing this story?
TW
8/5/24, 8:14 AM
Hell yeah, I love me a good symbiote story - the nipple play and the transformation that commences is just as hot too. So much imagery in all the transfer of sexy, alien fluids.

8/5/24, 6:08 PM
@TW Thanks. I appreciate the comment. The idea of a symbiote take over has pushed a button for me since the Spiderman Animated series back in the 90s. I've never posted a story before so I was nervous since I'm not a writer. Thought I would add it to the contest but the existing community story posed challenges.
8/5/24, 2:36 PM
Ah, always great to return to such a great series!
JX
8/3/24, 6:08 PM
Update this month?

8/5/24, 1:37 PM
@JX I’ll try but I can’t promise anything.
1976 colomberie shop
8/5/24, 1:00 PM
i had a very seductive experience in the channel isles on colomberie near howard davis park. while i tried trunks on the shop owner closed for lunch and when I came out he seduced me and had me on the shop floor, shop being closed for lunch. it was very enjoyable.
8/5/24, 12:58 PM
This was like toe-ta-lee great story! Thanks bro.
8/5/24, 7:08 AM
Leon's transformation is hot. If anything, I would like the see more of the description of his appearance before transformation. (or do you have any image in your mind?) Anyway, it's a great story as usual. Looking forward to see the further story. Thanks for your hard work. :)

Pcm
8/5/24, 8:08 AM
@[Dice](/user/show/75600) Thank you! Hope I live up to your expectation! I'm generally horrible at physical description, so I tens to avoid that. Leon is tall and broad-shouldered with short blond hair (like most characters in the Kingdom). He has shaved stubble. He does not have his knights' hulking stature, but makes up for it with his imperious, disciplined, and stern posture. He retains most of his body shapes after the corruption, but becoems obviously nore mascular and grows taller. His hair and stubble turn black, however.
8/5/24, 7:01 AM
Well this is even more sexy and hot then chapter 2. Which I like to go back to a lot of time. Can't wait to see what else The Chairman and brainpig will think of next. Theonly thing I wish was seeing a coach walk in on Malcolm and having their way with him. Other then that I'll still be cumming back to this one a few times.
8/5/24, 6:39 AM
I'm very much enjoying the story and the characters, but I find myself starting to skim sometimes. Seems to me that the writing could be tighter and there could be less repetition and excess verbiage. Even some of the dialogue seems too wordy to feel real. Maybe eventually another draft would be useful.