Recent Comments

8/4/24, 5:13 PM
This was a very intriguing story with a use of inflation/tf that I don't think I've ever seen before! It's cool to see you coming up with creative ideas like this/writing stories that are different tonally to your usual fare. I'll admit I was expecting a story more in line with your usual tone so I'm not personally a fan of the ending, but that's due to my expectations more than anything.
8/4/24, 3:51 PM
Since it seems to be taking longer than anticipated, any hope of posting the completed 4th chapter before finishing the 5th?
8/4/24, 6:30 AM
This was a DRAFT? Damn!

autoDream
8/4/24, 3:49 PM
@[Buster Red](/user/show/139530) I'm pretty busy, so I usually just sit down, write start to finish, then send it to the world.
mikegay4u
8/2/24, 7:43 AM
Great, perfect. So hot it kept me hard from when he pumped into Damien until the last sentence. Thank you.

8/4/24, 3:23 PM
@[mikegay4u](/user/show/451349) Thank you!
Hypnominion
8/4/24, 3:21 PM
Wlell done!
Hypnominion
8/4/24, 3:11 PM
Really great opening volley...
Hypnominion
8/4/24, 2:50 PM
I'd like to see more of the process of induction into the Army, itself, and how the mind (and literal) fucking integrates with it; such as his visceral responses to physucal transformation (haircut, etc.)
Anonymous
8/4/24, 2:30 PM
Damn! Your stories always, ALWAYS take me in: line, hook and sinker. BRAVO!
8/4/24, 6:31 AM
I liked the mind control and slave training methods and the uses made of the controlled roommate. I think the reasons i failed to get as much into the story are: 1) the entire story was narrated in a very objective unemotional manner which limited my getting into the emotions and intimate thoughts of the characters and limited the character development; 2) the story was shorter than my personal preference.

8/4/24, 1:22 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Thank you for the critique. I’ll try to play around with spicing up my narration in the future.
8/4/24, 12:45 PM
I want to see him getting fucked extremely rough by an alpha black convict and both his boys.