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Hypnominion
8/4/24, 3:21 PM
Wlell done!
Hypnominion
8/4/24, 3:11 PM
Really great opening volley...
Hypnominion
8/4/24, 2:50 PM
I'd like to see more of the process of induction into the Army, itself, and how the mind (and literal) fucking integrates with it; such as his visceral responses to physucal transformation (haircut, etc.)
Anonymous
8/4/24, 2:30 PM
Damn! Your stories always, ALWAYS take me in: line, hook and sinker. BRAVO!
8/4/24, 6:31 AM
I liked the mind control and slave training methods and the uses made of the controlled roommate. I think the reasons i failed to get as much into the story are: 1) the entire story was narrated in a very objective unemotional manner which limited my getting into the emotions and intimate thoughts of the characters and limited the character development; 2) the story was shorter than my personal preference.

8/4/24, 1:22 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Thank you for the critique. I’ll try to play around with spicing up my narration in the future.
8/4/24, 12:45 PM
I want to see him getting fucked extremely rough by an alpha black convict and both his boys.
Anonymous
8/4/24, 11:57 AM
still the best ever for me
8/3/24, 2:50 PM
Truly epic story telling , also quite erotic

8/4/24, 11:53 AM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Thank you sir
8/4/24, 10:29 AM
Love the build up
8/3/24, 5:26 PM
I think seeing the north first will be better, a bit of a breather

Pcm
8/3/24, 5:31 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I will likely borrow some of tge elements regarding the North, which is a really wonderful idea you came up with! However, I think I won't take the story there so you could have a free reign on how you want to build that territory.

8/3/24, 5:49 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Feel free to use whatever you need from the ideas we discussed, no worries

Pcm
8/4/24, 2:55 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Thank! Hooe you like my inclusion of Eleven as a deer woman.

8/4/24, 7:31 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I did, so that shows she has Northern roots

Pcm
8/4/24, 9:23 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Yeah, I got a backstory planned for her.

8/4/24, 9:38 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Very nice