Recent Comments

3/22/24, 1:20 PM
i am CRAZY about this story and the sensual way in which he captivates Victor. This is really enjoyable to read the alluring words to get the response from him. Please keep going! I cannot wait. Love your writing style.

3/22/24, 5:26 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks for the kind words. There are some more chapters in the can being proofed. Charles is at the start of a year long journey

8/1/24, 4:50 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Stole my words
8/1/24, 4:26 AM
Wow!!!! I loved this. I really hope you do the next chapter!!!!!
8/1/24, 3:49 AM
This was fuckin great. When got on the phone with Coach I totally lost it and blew my load. Very well written.
8/1/24, 3:11 AM
Gods, what a brilliant story.
8/1/24, 2:24 AM
Such a good series! Looking forward to the triggers for Alex and Bryce. The "Lily" command is so hot!
Anonymous
7/31/24, 10:59 PM
This was very hot!
7/31/24, 9:27 PM
I don't know what to say. A new direction for you.
7/31/24, 9:14 PM
Keep going!
7/30/24, 1:37 PM
I do wish it wasn't a mistress, then maybe he could bed the master. This was interesting, hot, and sexy.

Anonymous
7/31/24, 8:03 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) A Master would be hot, definitely! Adrianna might've been me channeling my first boss, haha. Also, Michael's coming from a theocratic, strictly sex-segregated society into a very different one. While he adapted easily enough, having a Mistress fucks with the heads of the less adaptable, like Bradley - who clings to his traditions (like bending) all the harder because he's so disoriented and uncomfortable with all the new. And I have a soft spot (errr, a hard spot) for disoriented bottoms, lol...

7/31/24, 8:47 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Yeah I have to admit that that was one of the parts of the story that didn't work for me, him having a mistress felt meh. Now him having a big buff male master, now that would have been hot. I liked Bradly and him not being a Creamer was an interesting 'switch' on expectations. It was cool though. And having it be Josiah was fun. But yeah the mistress element took me out of the story a bit, which was sightly sad in how much a sexy situation you had set up here.
7/31/24, 5:20 AM
Pity it wasn't Bradley, but was still pretty hot!

Anonymous
7/31/24, 7:58 PM
@[rayn](/user/show/432072) I know! I wanted Bradley to cream so bad - and _I'm_ the author! ;) Just wasn't his time...