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7/30/24, 1:37 PM
I do wish it wasn't a mistress, then maybe he could bed the master. This was interesting, hot, and sexy.

Anonymous
7/31/24, 8:03 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) A Master would be hot, definitely! Adrianna might've been me channeling my first boss, haha. Also, Michael's coming from a theocratic, strictly sex-segregated society into a very different one. While he adapted easily enough, having a Mistress fucks with the heads of the less adaptable, like Bradley - who clings to his traditions (like bending) all the harder because he's so disoriented and uncomfortable with all the new. And I have a soft spot (errr, a hard spot) for disoriented bottoms, lol...

7/31/24, 8:47 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Yeah I have to admit that that was one of the parts of the story that didn't work for me, him having a mistress felt meh. Now him having a big buff male master, now that would have been hot. I liked Bradly and him not being a Creamer was an interesting 'switch' on expectations. It was cool though. And having it be Josiah was fun. But yeah the mistress element took me out of the story a bit, which was sightly sad in how much a sexy situation you had set up here.
7/31/24, 5:20 AM
Pity it wasn't Bradley, but was still pretty hot!

Anonymous
7/31/24, 7:58 PM
@[rayn](/user/show/432072) I know! I wanted Bradley to cream so bad - and _I'm_ the author! ;) Just wasn't his time...
7/31/24, 3:04 PM
Yeah... We need more

7/31/24, 5:06 PM
@[Allan Weiss](/user/show/472888) I actually have two other parts already written. My notes app has a bunch of stuff lol
calv
7/30/24, 7:35 PM
Great work! Looking forward to the next part!

7/31/24, 4:06 PM
@calv Thanks! However, this is meant to be just a one-off piece so I'm not planning on having any follow ups for it at this time.
Anonymous
7/31/24, 3:52 PM
Fantastic.
Sep 6, 2023
7/31/24, 3:23 PM
such a hot story to be sucked into and made a slave of.
7/31/24, 6:54 AM
Very hot! i do hope your Sir will have you write more about how He continues to train and use his new boy.

7/31/24, 2:31 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) There will be more. He has said he wants me to tell my story -- well, really his story. He has me working on the next chapter now, Sir.
7/31/24, 6:25 AM
I love how this has started. i relate strongly to the boy and his struggles to know exactly how i define my boundaries between fantasy and reality. It is my dream have this kind of meeting of the minds with a Dominant Man, and am particularly attracted to Black Men. Like this boy I would feel I have to follow my dream in spite of the important issues still to be sorted out, just as he laid out. Thanks for this first chapter. I'm off to read on!

Littledickslave@yahoo.com
7/31/24, 2:29 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I am glad you can see not only the struggle in submitting but the need to face reality, even if fearful about it. No doubt other slaves have fought the same internal battle and realized that their fantasy not only can be but truly is what their reality needs to be. I hope you do not hesitate to serve Black Men. My Master has now had me serve many of them. They are so strong, so masculine and so dominant, Sir.
7/31/24, 2:19 PM
I so want to buy that shampoo.