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Jul 23, 2024
7/31/24, 9:03 AM
So Hot! More please!
7/31/24, 8:28 AM
More please and soon!
7/31/24, 8:26 AM
This is Very HOT! Please continue!
Anonymous
3/13/19, 5:09 PM
One idea I think would be cool would be for gay guys to have do an intervention for people who are about to get into a straight marriage. They would come in and rescue the the poor fellow from a lifetime of monogameous, hetro sex

7/31/24, 8:21 AM
@Anonymous love it
Derek Williams
3/13/19, 5:03 PM
That was fantastic. Do *any* guys make it through straight?

Frank
7/31/24, 8:20 AM
@Derek Williams No one makes it through, and their wives become lesbians pissed forever at men.
7/30/24, 7:55 PM
Incredible work, I was enjoying the world of two, but this branching off with more characters is fresh and exciting. I hope we get sexy development and chapters from both Jake and Amir’s perspectives while separated. There has been so much foreshadowing about the cloudberries that I was really excited to see Amir become a completely cloudybrained airheaded ditzy happy AGREEABLE twinkslut. Maybe he’ll enjoy doing that more now with other characters who aren’t stupid annoying Jake. An above commenter talked about how torn they are because Jake is so annoying. I have differing thoughts about that myself. For one, there’s some subtle details throughout that point to the idea that neither Jake or Amir is fully being themself, but the one dimensional versions they see of each other - Jake is “so annoying”, Amir is a “haughty stuck up nerd who needs to be taken down a peg”. At least to me it seems both of them have become the others shallow idea of each other since being transported here. I’m sympathetic to the fact that Jake seems like such a completely annoying asshole because Amir is narrating. If we step outside his perspective, there’s multiple lines indicating he’s being sassier and more immediately confrontational in a way that isn’t like himself. They’re both being bratty and annoying, because they found each other annoying, and and manifested that in each other. I’d like them BOTH to continue to get warped outside their control, taken “down” a peg (up in sexuality) My other thought about this, is that it seems well set up that the compass is NOT with Amir any longer. Time for Jake to get his sexuality recalibrated and jostled around.

7/31/24, 8:08 AM
@[brium](/user/show/10011305) Hmmm, It's an interesting theory and I haven't thought about that. I think that Amir is behaving obliviously because of the berries making him less perceptive of what is actually going on and just "working in auto mode" - doing what needs to be done to survive by the book without taking into account that things are obviously not normal. Jake seemed like an asshole from the get go, but instead of being a leech he has become more proactive in his take over. My thought was that it's because now he has the upper hand. In the exposition Jake is at a disadvantage position since he is an outcast, doesn't have his equipment and doesn't really know anything about camping. However, once in the forest he understood what many of the items do fairly quickly and used them for his advantage while Amir just dumbed himself down. In addition, if at first Amir had all the equipment and Jake had none, now Jake has them (and keeps on studying them) while Amir barely have any and doesn't understand them. On the other hand, Jake eating the nature bars keeps coming up in almost every scene he appears in. If the berries make someone more oblivious and agreeable, it just might be that the bars make the consumer more domineering and aggressive, which is only being further amplified by Amir's airheadedness (and vice versa). I believe that this will fit your theory. He's still a major ass though.
7/31/24, 7:10 AM
I love a good isakai. Cant wait for more, this is on my alley, up my chimney and in my wheelhouse, please update soon.
AgentCoyner
7/31/24, 3:58 AM
God *damn* that was hot!!
7/30/24, 11:17 AM
Heya, @[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823), @[rojohber](/user/show/149379), @[rayn](/user/show/432072), @[tenser13](/user/show/1280137) Decided kinda last minute to submit a challenge in the Paladin/Witch universe. One of the prequel stories in my head already sorta fit. Forgot that being in the challenge made me anonymous, lol - will you find it? ;)

rayn
7/31/24, 1:23 AM
Wasn't hard, when it did say "Set in the Paladin and the Witch universe". Gonna read it now! Any ETA on book 2?