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Hypnominion
7/28/24, 10:58 PM
Nicely structured.
7/28/24, 10:11 PM
It's hard to believe this is one of your first stories! I got completely immersed in your sensual, tactile descriptions. And I loved the twists, the surprising rebellions! If I have one note, it's that I expect a bit more from a "leather" tag than just something a character wears. Then again, I guess it did add some eroticism when I visualized the scene. Well done!
7/28/24, 9:23 PM
Such a great story! Love all the different lives and how they all intermingle. Can't wait for the next chapter
7/28/24, 9:01 PM
Promising start!
7/28/24, 8:57 PM
Wow, that's great! The first chapter didn't do much for me, but the second made it all up. I so much want to be blissed out myself reading this... And once again, you're missing the love rating :)
7/28/24, 8:28 PM
You've written amazing stories. I can tell it's an early work, but it's still great. I love that twist at the end!
7/28/24, 7:54 PM
Do you think you’ll have another chapter before the contest ends?
Anonym
7/28/24, 7:42 PM
Well, my personal theory regarding Mastermind is that they are the sibling(?) of Detective Ames husband. Or maybe the husband, after faking their deaths?! Much to think about. Regarding the identities of the lost boys.... the only one I recognized after Monkey King was Sidon :sweat_smile: (Altough Wildcat made me think of a tokyo afterschool summoners character, but idk how intentional that is) Prince Alarming made me think of that blond prince dude from the mlm movie that came out recently. Red, White, Royal Blue, something like that. For future theories, I do hope that our good Detective joins the Lost Boys. My gut says he might be the final one! Very much looking forward to how it goes
7/28/24, 4:45 PM
Really enjoyed. A little visual descriptors of the subjects would be great as well as I am looking forward to sexual encounters coming up vs video texts. Looking forward to the next chapter

7/28/24, 7:33 PM
@[mutak](/user/show/952269) Thanks for reading!
Littledickslave@yahoo.com
7/28/24, 7:32 PM
Very observant Sir. Yes, he ordered me to write this based on my actual experience as I remember it, although the timing and some of the details are arranged and described to hopefully meet the desires for this type of story on this platform, Sir. I should point out that he reviews my drafts and adds or eliminates what he wants, Sir.