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Anonym
7/28/24, 7:42 PM
Well, my personal theory regarding Mastermind is that they are the sibling(?) of Detective Ames husband. Or maybe the husband, after faking their deaths?! Much to think about. Regarding the identities of the lost boys.... the only one I recognized after Monkey King was Sidon :sweat_smile: (Altough Wildcat made me think of a tokyo afterschool summoners character, but idk how intentional that is) Prince Alarming made me think of that blond prince dude from the mlm movie that came out recently. Red, White, Royal Blue, something like that. For future theories, I do hope that our good Detective joins the Lost Boys. My gut says he might be the final one! Very much looking forward to how it goes
7/28/24, 4:45 PM
Really enjoyed. A little visual descriptors of the subjects would be great as well as I am looking forward to sexual encounters coming up vs video texts. Looking forward to the next chapter

7/28/24, 7:33 PM
@[mutak](/user/show/952269) Thanks for reading!
Littledickslave@yahoo.com
7/28/24, 7:32 PM
Very observant Sir. Yes, he ordered me to write this based on my actual experience as I remember it, although the timing and some of the details are arranged and described to hopefully meet the desires for this type of story on this platform, Sir. I should point out that he reviews my drafts and adds or eliminates what he wants, Sir.
7/28/24, 6:33 PM
There seems to be an element of truth this story. In all three chapters, it seems to unfold naturally. Is there an autobiographic aspect to this?
7/28/24, 4:36 PM
This is such an intriguing premise and I just love the dynamic shift from Anthony and Derek, father and son, to Tony and Derek, brothers. Can't wait to see more!

7/28/24, 6:15 PM
@[Transformulation](/user/show/462109) I’m glad you liked it, thanks! My twisted mind is working on two additional chapters, with two members of the family joining the gym. Stay tuned!
7/28/24, 6:08 PM
Dual viewing angle , proselytize,:heart_eyes:so familiar and i like it a lot.
EJG
7/28/24, 5:45 PM
Hot stuff. Three things have me fantasizing . - I just sure hope Coop invite the whole frat round to slut out Pudge? I'd love ito see it from the slutty Pudge's POV. And damned,i just wish i was in Pudges place. Slutting out to arrogant ALPHA jocks is one of my biggest fantasies Shhhh
Anonymous
7/28/24, 5:10 PM
Wow...more!
Anon
7/28/24, 2:18 PM
I think what I'm also looking in interest toward is should Leon change, how should he look like. I keep imagining something akin to a powerful figure, but more in tune with water or steam, though not in a mermaid like sense, as you've mentioned the deep ones are more akin to fish and the sea- and Leon is not of them. I keep thinking something more akin to the asrai, or the nixies- both of which draw from germanic and english folklore, being spirits of the water- though these are often seen as female, so this would be a genderbent version. Since the deep ones are more akin to mermaids, and there's also the aspect of temptation and luring- I also think to some extent about the slavic rusalka- though in a gender bent sense as well- rusalka are often seen as being female, and have a role akin to sirens in tempting folk by alluring them. These three beings are more associated with rivers and fresh water, which is what is often used in baths in most cases. Yet the commanding and strict nature of Leon- which likely will not change too much- though may- also reminds me of the fiercer natures of the ifrit and some of the depictions of Triton. I think I just went and reiterated what you yourself mentioned to me earlier on the intricacies of personhood and it's intersection with demonhood with the characters, so sorry about that. Still, what you say makes sense- I guess this is a case of orange and blue morality- they in some ways are not entirely beholden to how humans see things, much like how the fae and spirits often see things in a slightly different way than ordinary humans. However, they are not entirely divorced from human understandings, though still eerie in a number of ways.

Pcm
7/28/24, 3:23 PM
@Anon In a way, demonification by Gregory is way more horrifying than simple hypnosis. You are completely yourself, but that self has been altered and corrupted beyond return. I must confess my lack of knowledge regarding most of the entities you mentioned. There is a limit to what the AI can come up with. My vision for Leon is that he's foing to be muscled of course, but instead of becoming a hulking brute, he is gonna become a.more alluring "gentlemanly" and refined masculature. War and battles are not what he wants to do, unlike with Gregory who is born for battle and relishes in them. It is always more about duties, and Leon dreams of a life where he and his men could relax and simply be happy. Demons are much more simple than faes I believe. Their desire is very simple, pleasure, in any shape or form, physical, emotional, spiritual or otherwise. They like fuxking because it is pleasurable. They want to be with their family because it is pleasurable. They fight for their loved ones because love pleasures them.

Anon
7/28/24, 4:42 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) What you speak of here is striking as it is the mode of operation of miquella in elden ring. While he was well intentioned, he often would make a person have affection for him, without changing who they were. In trying to change the world for the better amidst the horror of the shattering, he began to diacard his own humanity and began to walk down the path of tragic tyranny in his desire to save the world, to the point that on aspect he discarded, st.trina- begs the player to save miquella from himself, s he had lost his love and humanity in his desire to save the world and its people. One figure mentions that miquella while well intentioned is terrifying in his ability to change people yet not change them. Gregory I think frightens me because he must have been corrupted by somebody much stronger amongst the demons. They must have developed this method to build off the old hypnosis method. Your idea for Leon makes a striking amount of sense and ties well with his desire to give his men and himself rest and safety. When it comes to demons, what you speak of sounds more akin to more malicious spirits like one I once heard of that constantly tempt people that are sent by demons- but it is equally upheld that these figures can become good themselves, though it can be rare. But like you've mentioned, the demons themselves are more fixated on pleasure and the actions that scry it out. With that in mind, things become much more different. Yet even here we see that Collin is able to some extent work past that in some ways, as per his philosophical discussion with garret.
Jul 4, 2024
7/28/24, 3:34 PM
I have never been more jealous of fictional characters in my life, this is SO hot.