Recent Comments

7/28/24, 8:28 PM
You've written amazing stories. I can tell it's an early work, but it's still great. I love that twist at the end!
7/28/24, 7:54 PM
Do you think you’ll have another chapter before the contest ends?
Anonym
7/28/24, 7:42 PM
Well, my personal theory regarding Mastermind is that they are the sibling(?) of Detective Ames husband. Or maybe the husband, after faking their deaths?! Much to think about. Regarding the identities of the lost boys.... the only one I recognized after Monkey King was Sidon :sweat_smile: (Altough Wildcat made me think of a tokyo afterschool summoners character, but idk how intentional that is) Prince Alarming made me think of that blond prince dude from the mlm movie that came out recently. Red, White, Royal Blue, something like that. For future theories, I do hope that our good Detective joins the Lost Boys. My gut says he might be the final one! Very much looking forward to how it goes
7/28/24, 4:45 PM
Really enjoyed. A little visual descriptors of the subjects would be great as well as I am looking forward to sexual encounters coming up vs video texts. Looking forward to the next chapter

7/28/24, 7:33 PM
@[mutak](/user/show/952269) Thanks for reading!
Littledickslave@yahoo.com
7/28/24, 7:32 PM
Very observant Sir. Yes, he ordered me to write this based on my actual experience as I remember it, although the timing and some of the details are arranged and described to hopefully meet the desires for this type of story on this platform, Sir. I should point out that he reviews my drafts and adds or eliminates what he wants, Sir.
7/28/24, 6:33 PM
There seems to be an element of truth this story. In all three chapters, it seems to unfold naturally. Is there an autobiographic aspect to this?
7/28/24, 4:36 PM
This is such an intriguing premise and I just love the dynamic shift from Anthony and Derek, father and son, to Tony and Derek, brothers. Can't wait to see more!

7/28/24, 6:15 PM
@[Transformulation](/user/show/462109) I’m glad you liked it, thanks! My twisted mind is working on two additional chapters, with two members of the family joining the gym. Stay tuned!
7/28/24, 6:08 PM
Dual viewing angle , proselytize,:heart_eyes:so familiar and i like it a lot.
EJG
7/28/24, 5:45 PM
Hot stuff. Three things have me fantasizing . - I just sure hope Coop invite the whole frat round to slut out Pudge? I'd love ito see it from the slutty Pudge's POV. And damned,i just wish i was in Pudges place. Slutting out to arrogant ALPHA jocks is one of my biggest fantasies Shhhh
Anonymous
7/28/24, 5:10 PM
Wow...more!