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Jul 4, 2024
7/28/24, 3:34 PM
I have never been more jealous of fictional characters in my life, this is SO hot.
Test
7/28/24, 3:22 PM
This is sexy, warm, and hot! Great writing. Love the romance.
7/28/24, 1:46 PM
Great story! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

7/28/24, 1:55 PM
@[Kurtis311](/user/show/571116) Thanks for reading!
7/28/24, 12:38 PM
This is my favorite story in a LOOOOONG time. Its so easy to read and lots of fun! THANK YOU. I love these characters. I cannot wait to get more intimate with them.

7/28/24, 1:37 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks! I hope I can keep it going in a way that everyone enjoys. I’m rewriting a bit of the next few chapters as I went too fast and realized too much at once muddied the waters. Thanks!
7/28/24, 1:30 PM
i love your writing style SOOO much. THANK YOU
Anon
7/27/24, 10:08 PM
@Pcm I think that if we consider how altered the demons become in some ways- I wonder if one could argue the insanity defense. They technically are cognizant but also not exactly in a typical human sense anymore. But they also have mental capacity and faculties as well. It's not like they are raving mad. But they definetly aren't as they were either. I think for me, Leon's desire for bathing is also a desire for cleanliness, as well as the end goal and preservation of it, alongside being able to be vulnerable and rest. While I can see him desiring to make Frederick clean, I don't think he'd like Frederick constantly trying to make him dirty or spaces he likes dirty. A cleaner state naturally requires in many cases coming out of something less clean- so while he might find cleaning Frederick a challenging but alluring task, i think he'd get mighty annoyed at Frederick trying to sabotage that. It could work well in synergy, but I feel there'd be a constant tug and pull between them as well. That's just my view though- I'm sure you'll find a way to make it make sense that I'm not considering right now.

Pcm
7/28/24, 2:50 AM
@Anon Maybe? As with Garett, I made a point that demons were altered at their very cores and had been convinced that they liked being demons. They were not hypnotized, the actively enjoyed their new selves and turning others. The thing is, like other main characters, they had history. Leon is fond of Frederic like he is fond of Gregory. Yes, Fred could be a little annoyibg with his unscrupulous way, but Leon ultimately thought of Greg and Fred both as his brothers or even sons. I don't want to deprive them of that.

Anon
7/28/24, 1:22 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Ah so it's more like a playful rivalry between Leon and Frederick. That makes sense, specially if they have history with each other. I think perhaps in this case, it's less insanity and just somewhat alien thinking then from a human perspective- they haven't lost who they are, but they identify more with demonic thought and ideals now in some ways, but retain a human core in others. They haven't been hypnotized like you've said, but they undoubtedly have changed.
7/28/24, 1:14 PM
Wonder if we will ever see more of this story? It started a bit average, but it really grew as it went, and Gill's reign of terror was sjaping up to be so sexy and hot!
Anonymous
7/28/24, 12:50 PM
Gosh please keep this going
7/28/24, 12:06 PM
Every one of your stories is a gem.
user69444266
7/28/24, 11:51 AM
Its been two years... where is the next part🫠🤩🤩