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7/27/24, 8:22 PM
Wow, this is beyond hot.
7/27/24, 12:41 PM
Perfection and this has to be EdIam

7/27/24, 7:38 PM
@[Buffy67](/user/show/13727) Yes, it looks a lot like Edlan's style, but I'm still not 100% sure. But it's probably his.
7/27/24, 7:30 PM
Dude, I LOVED this story! Super fun, well-written, hot as hell. The perfect trifecta! Cooper's tirades went just far enough to cement the fact he was a dick, without going into hating the character, which made his eventual giving in that much better. I love that towing the line between Cooper's spankings just to humiliate Pudge vs. the actual enjoyment he was getting out of it. All of it was just really easy to follow and packed with loads of character and charm. VERY well done! I can't wait to see who this is in hopes of seeing if you've written similar stories! Either way, keep up the good work!
7/27/24, 7:25 PM
MORE! I need more!
7/27/24, 7:11 PM
Abso-fucking-mazing! Oh my god, I want so much to have this happen to me!
7/27/24, 6:57 PM
This is incredibly hot! How did I miss this yet? Pushing all my buttons!
7/27/24, 6:54 PM
Concurred with the other commenter - really great start and introduction to our characters. The radio broadcasting Jake's thoughts was a neat idea and I enjoyed the brevity it brought despite it also being a really pivotal moment. Speaking of brevity - I really enjoyed the light and casual writing style you brought to the table here, it really worked well with the story you're telling and the characters you're introducing! Looking forward to what's next!
Art
7/27/24, 6:24 PM
I like it as well except for the parts about making the best friends come to hate each other. The whole experience should be about love. Not only love of Benny but new found love of cock.
7/27/24, 5:46 PM
So hot. First chapter definitely just setting things up and I guess for fans of military. But now, super wholesome within squad interactions, and likely (or just hopeful) evil officers xD cannot wait.
DannyStorm
7/27/24, 4:57 PM
Mmmm definitely a great ending, hope if you come back to it daddy can get more used to the chastity cage tho that was soooooo hot

7/27/24, 4:59 PM
@DannyStorm Glad you loved it. Yeah, I definitely think the cage would return. Even if Pieter never even needed to lock if