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7/26/24, 1:10 PM
Wow! Timmy is quite naughty. This is so much fun. THANK YOU for your compelling writing. I love the concept and the control is very fun and intense. This is so clever. I love when you turned Dylan into a cock-guy. its so exciting to find out what happens. WELL DONE
Anonymous
7/26/24, 12:53 PM
This is great! Want to see where it goes
7/26/24, 12:45 PM
What a fucking hot story. It’s a shame we don’t have more stories like this of a hot, big dicked dumb jock fucking the hell out of the big assed nerd. Amazing, can’t wait for more
7/25/24, 2:30 AM
Great chapter! Will there be more?

7/25/24, 11:31 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thanks! There’s one more to wrap things up.

7/26/24, 12:41 PM
@[TitusMoorhead](/user/show/14559) :heart:
7/26/24, 12:00 PM
fuck yes more please!!!
7/26/24, 5:54 AM
Oy Vey! I hope you post the next chapter soon? I’m curious about Barnaby’s situation.

7/26/24, 11:26 AM
@[OU812](/user/show/14254) Far more in my personal life came up than I was expecting so it won’t happen before the end of the challenge but I do have an outline and started writing it so hopefully I will be able to publish it afterwards.
7/26/24, 8:32 AM
This series is great. Has a classic no-nonsense horny MC concept and is excellently written. I like the shifting focus to get an insight into the minds of the ones being controlled.
Anonymous
7/26/24, 7:42 AM
I wish you continued this story. It is really good!
Anonymous
7/21/24, 10:33 PM
Oh, man! I would've loved another "bad ending" with Nick going mad with power for real and becoming a gas mask wearing, leather-clad supervillain! The only reason I'm not mad we didn't get one is...well, I'm pretty sure that's *just* the kind of kinky fantasy he and Henry secretly live out every night when they "do their duty" to produce more super serum. :wink: Actually, now that I think about it, who's to say there isn't some truth to it? I mean, let's look at the facts for a minute: Nick has bona fide mind control powers now, he's secretly enslaved one former hero with no one the wiser, and his ~~minion~~ bitch Henry can basically "control" the rest of the team through their gear -- and that's without even getting into the fact that they're dependent on the pair's cum! So is this really the "happy ending" for a pair of heroic lovers, or the birth of a devious new mastermind? Or could it be...both...? :thinking:

7/21/24, 10:43 PM
@Anonymous Who can say,... :smirk: I kinda love the idea of seeing a world where Nick and Henry get a little greedy and turn their minds and powers against their new team. I certainly won't do it here, but it's something I wouldn't be opposed to exploring in a 'what-if' at some point. And, yeah, maybe we'll see how Henry and Nick's little fantasies play out soon,... :hand_over_mouth:

7/22/24, 10:22 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Actually, I was thinking along the same lines. For who would know any better? Nick is now OP with his mind control and telekinesis. Does he let his darker kinks come out more broadly into his environment, deliberately or accidentally? Get power hungry? Or will he live long enough to become the villian as the saying goes? He has Carl and Henry. Then there the ‘super’ team. What if he goes looking for the previously freed guys? Maybe a different blend of Tri-Hard, so to speak. There is no need for tech or drugs like the predecessors. He has the power to make it happen. Perhaps operating in shades of gray?

7/23/24, 1:09 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Certainly something I'd enjoy pursuing at some point,... ;)

Anonymous
7/26/24, 7:30 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) By way of inspiration, some ideas I had: -Nick has Henry make a fancy new rubber suit for himself with all the bells and whistles, then brainwashes him into forgetting he made it. That way, Nick can spring it on him "out of nowhere" in a scene, while perfectly matching his preferences. (Honestly, the whole "memory manipulation" concept has tons of potential in by itself.) -Nick draining Henry's powers out through his dick is one of their favorite scenes to do during "harvest time." (What can I say, I like power drain scenes.) -The pair design a collar for Henry to wear "at work," under the pretense that it's a handy tool for monitoring vitals, managing his powers, aiding in communications, etc.. The rest of the team buy in to the cover story so much that they clamor to have collars added to their suits as well. An embarrassed Henry tries to dissuade them, or come up with excuses why he can't do it, but they're too persistent. Nick, meanwhile, finds the thought of having all of them "collared" amusing. Eventually, the collars are in fact integrated into the team uniforms, but for some reason, Nick never gets one. And it never occurs to any of the other members to question why he doesn't. (Almost as if the very thought had been erased from their minds...) -Every now and then, Henry messes with Nick's gear -- putting electrodes in the groin of his suit, programming his helmet visor to display subliminal messages, etc. -- knowing full well what kind of "punishment" to expect later. (And maybe, Nick finds a way to pre-empt one of Henry's pranks at some point?)
7/26/24, 7:21 AM
This is brillant ! Thank YOU so much ! It really allows one to experiment the excitment of being taken ! I love it