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Anonymous
7/21/24, 10:33 PM
Oh, man! I would've loved another "bad ending" with Nick going mad with power for real and becoming a gas mask wearing, leather-clad supervillain! The only reason I'm not mad we didn't get one is...well, I'm pretty sure that's *just* the kind of kinky fantasy he and Henry secretly live out every night when they "do their duty" to produce more super serum. :wink: Actually, now that I think about it, who's to say there isn't some truth to it? I mean, let's look at the facts for a minute: Nick has bona fide mind control powers now, he's secretly enslaved one former hero with no one the wiser, and his ~~minion~~ bitch Henry can basically "control" the rest of the team through their gear -- and that's without even getting into the fact that they're dependent on the pair's cum! So is this really the "happy ending" for a pair of heroic lovers, or the birth of a devious new mastermind? Or could it be...both...? :thinking:

7/21/24, 10:43 PM
@Anonymous Who can say,... :smirk: I kinda love the idea of seeing a world where Nick and Henry get a little greedy and turn their minds and powers against their new team. I certainly won't do it here, but it's something I wouldn't be opposed to exploring in a 'what-if' at some point. And, yeah, maybe we'll see how Henry and Nick's little fantasies play out soon,... :hand_over_mouth:

7/22/24, 10:22 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Actually, I was thinking along the same lines. For who would know any better? Nick is now OP with his mind control and telekinesis. Does he let his darker kinks come out more broadly into his environment, deliberately or accidentally? Get power hungry? Or will he live long enough to become the villian as the saying goes? He has Carl and Henry. Then there the ‘super’ team. What if he goes looking for the previously freed guys? Maybe a different blend of Tri-Hard, so to speak. There is no need for tech or drugs like the predecessors. He has the power to make it happen. Perhaps operating in shades of gray?

7/23/24, 1:09 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Certainly something I'd enjoy pursuing at some point,... ;)

Anonymous
7/26/24, 7:30 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) By way of inspiration, some ideas I had: -Nick has Henry make a fancy new rubber suit for himself with all the bells and whistles, then brainwashes him into forgetting he made it. That way, Nick can spring it on him "out of nowhere" in a scene, while perfectly matching his preferences. (Honestly, the whole "memory manipulation" concept has tons of potential in by itself.) -Nick draining Henry's powers out through his dick is one of their favorite scenes to do during "harvest time." (What can I say, I like power drain scenes.) -The pair design a collar for Henry to wear "at work," under the pretense that it's a handy tool for monitoring vitals, managing his powers, aiding in communications, etc.. The rest of the team buy in to the cover story so much that they clamor to have collars added to their suits as well. An embarrassed Henry tries to dissuade them, or come up with excuses why he can't do it, but they're too persistent. Nick, meanwhile, finds the thought of having all of them "collared" amusing. Eventually, the collars are in fact integrated into the team uniforms, but for some reason, Nick never gets one. And it never occurs to any of the other members to question why he doesn't. (Almost as if the very thought had been erased from their minds...) -Every now and then, Henry messes with Nick's gear -- putting electrodes in the groin of his suit, programming his helmet visor to display subliminal messages, etc. -- knowing full well what kind of "punishment" to expect later. (And maybe, Nick finds a way to pre-empt one of Henry's pranks at some point?)
7/26/24, 7:21 AM
This is brillant ! Thank YOU so much ! It really allows one to experiment the excitment of being taken ! I love it
7/26/24, 6:41 AM
This was a very fun and hot story to read! I can't wait to see what else happens to him!
DWK
7/26/24, 6:08 AM
This is going to be good.
DWK
7/26/24, 5:57 AM
Looking forward to reading all the chapters. 👍🏻👍🏻
DWK
7/26/24, 5:26 AM
Great story, looking forward to seeing where you are taking the characters and us. 👍🏻👍🏻
archer19cm
7/26/24, 4:50 AM
Jeez man. More please!
7/25/24, 12:06 PM
It’s crazy how well you put yourself (and us) in each of your characters’ heads, making us share both the inner conflicts and the horniness! That was intense! Can’t wait for the finale! (Those frat boys need a good dose of dominant bottoms, though!)

7/25/24, 2:08 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) I’ve been looking forward to your comment, thanks for reading! I was really pleased with this chapter because it had some of my best emotional work in the series so far, and I’m glad that it fit in just right with the horny. I want to be able to do both, always both. (And yes, you’re right! You’ll get your wish real soon…) I’m trying to finish the full contents of a novella first, though, so I don’t know how long it’ll be before I can get the last two chapters of P&FB out. Keep an eye out for Frat Boys Hunting instead.

7/26/24, 4:20 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) My eyes are wide open 👀
Anonymous
7/26/24, 4:18 AM
B-bravo Sir. This is... everything! Thank you!