Recent Comments

7/26/24, 12:19 AM
This is definitely getting better.
BDJBoy
7/26/24, 12:13 AM
Wow :hot_face: Can't wait for more!
7/25/24, 11:55 PM
I really liked the idea. PD: It's good to see another non native English speaker fellow writer in here 😉.
7/25/24, 11:23 PM
This was incredible! I have always wanted a story exactly like this! Dominant jock top “punishes” the gay loser by fucking him senseless, or using his body and cock to tease and torment! Thank you for scratching that itch!!!
7/25/24, 9:57 PM
This is awesome, I can't wait for the next chapter
Larry
7/25/24, 8:58 PM
What is the name of your Patreon page? Can you post a link so I can find more of your great stories? Thanks

7/25/24, 9:11 PM
@Larry I'm phasing out my Patreon, you can join my SubscribeStar instead, the link is in my bio if you click on my profile name.
7/25/24, 7:56 PM
This is an interesting story. I like the twist. I also like how it's the dad-figure who is a subby bottom here.
Zander
7/25/24, 7:42 PM
It would be possible to brainwash Nemesis and turn him into a Dominant alpha top who likes to hypnotize and fuck Heroes and add his harem. At the same time, Solaris destroys the evil personality of Nemesis. and he refuses to be a villain) And the best thing is that Solaris tells Nemesis his plan (what Solaris plans to do with him) and that he will become Solaris' boyfriend after brainwashing and will fuck him every day.😈
7/25/24, 6:43 PM
I approve! A lot! :-) What about some euphemisms for the three stages of transformation? I suggest "Devoted Companion", "Passion Enthusiast" and "Insatiable Aficionado" - sounds really classy, and perhaps good for selling the deal. :-)
7/25/24, 6:41 PM
Thanks so much for some great writing and the kinky plot the writing brings alive.