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6/20/25, 9:01 PM
Poppers get me weak and willingly too. I could easily take Riley's place
6/20/25, 5:54 PM
I read all 6 chapters in one go. I must say I’m conflicted. It feels weird to read a « slowburn » that could be real. I mean that the way you paint the interaction and dialogues feels very … vivid. I feel very impressed by the way you write, thank you a lot for your time, creativity and talent ! It’s also very refreshing from what I’m used to read so thanks for hooking me up to that.

6/20/25, 8:57 PM
@[DomslutinBriefs](/user/show/10062287) Thanks so much for giving this feedback! I'm always happy to hear about people who discover this and binge-read it. I recognize that this type of premise and storytelling method isn't going to be everyone's cup of tea, but for the sake of the readers who've taken the time to tell me how much they enjoy it, it's definitely something I feel happy about writing.
6/20/25, 8:49 PM
I like such unexpected things in your stories
6/20/25, 8:26 PM
Very sweet and sexy! I’m glad everyone found peace and happiness with their best selves.
6/20/25, 7:19 PM
I hope the second part will be as exciting as the first
6/20/25, 7:09 PM
Huge congratulations on completing Donnie. It deeply moved me, especially knowing you finished this shared vision with your late friend. To honor this beautiful work, may I humbly request permission to translate it into Chinese for non-commercial sharing? I will clearly credit you and link to the original. I completely understand if you decline. Thank you for this heartfelt story.

6/20/25, 7:10 PM
@[zCanon](/user/show/10019162) Help yourself

6/20/25, 7:13 PM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) Thank you very much. You and your friends both deserve the best in the world.
Anonymous
6/20/25, 4:51 PM
Very hot! Love when transformations sneak up on you. Wondering if the age and weight gain are a curse of comeuppance for scoffing at the older guys at the bar. Is Jake gonna catch any flak then? Keep going. But make sure to make more D. Will soon!!!
6/20/25, 5:17 AM
I’m so glad you’re back! Can’t wait for the next one.

6/20/25, 4:12 PM
@[Caio_Lucas](/user/show/10022457) Thanks, and don't worry. There's more to come.
Bob
6/20/25, 5:53 AM
I don’t know if you are even aware of this but you used the phrase “stark contrast” 11 different times throughout the story. It was very repetitive and took away from the descriptive writing in my opinion
6/20/25, 3:27 PM
I think it's not intended that this is a branched story, right? If not, make sure to set the "previous chapter" in your 3rd chapter correctly (to the 2nd chapter).