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Kods
7/20/24, 2:19 AM
That was a nice ending, Not exactly the happiest ending for Carl though. Man got put through the ringer and even then still had to take more.

7/20/24, 11:37 AM
@[Kods](/user/show/10002779) Thank you! Carl doesn't come out of this looking 'great', but he's at least in better hands than he is in some other endings. Maybe,... We'll see in the epilogue!
7/20/24, 11:06 AM
these are so good please keep at it
7/20/24, 9:47 AM
Wow you've been writing bangers! This, the lamp house, and what maketh a man have all been top reads imo recently
7/20/24, 8:02 AM
Yet again, you’re doing possibly the best writing on here. Well done with this so far Big fan
7/19/24, 7:54 AM
Hot! Great writing - I always look forward to your stories being published. Can't wait for the next chapter.

7/20/24, 2:51 AM
@[Yorksbiker08](/user/show/1049586) Very happy you like them!

7/20/24, 7:40 AM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) Can't wait to see how Rosenware brings Will into the company
7/20/24, 7:05 AM
Fantastic! And this needs a Romance rating, too :)
Jul 7, 2024
Anonymous
7/20/24, 6:48 AM
Oh you better believe I’m rock hard, man! Love your stories. Always excited to see a new one.
7/20/24, 3:02 AM
@edlam - are there more chapters that you can post? Also, do you think you can post the origin story “how to be a good boy handbook”? Pretty please?

7/20/24, 5:35 AM
@[BillionaireSociety](/user/show/925917) This was actually a side story that the writer asked Swizz permission to write that was influenced by his story. I’m not sure Swizz has his version any longer but can ask!
7/20/24, 2:09 AM
A great start! I wish for more chapters.

7/20/24, 3:36 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I am not sure I will do more. It was just a nice idea to do something similar and had permission to use the characters this time.
7/19/24, 8:44 PM
Absolutely loved the first part of the story! Two hot guys being captured--and chloroformed--are both things I love to read about. Can't wait to see what happens to these two best friends in the second part. And what's this mutation that this secret organization is so interested in. Great start! Looking forward to more!!! Thanks for sharing your writing talents with the readers on this site. Much appreciated!!

7/20/24, 2:33 AM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) Thanks for reading! Really glad you enjoyed!