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Anonymous
7/19/24, 3:36 PM
hell yeah, so hot and bothered for more
Littledickslave@yahoo.com
7/19/24, 2:33 PM
I am pleased you are enjoying it, U.K.guy. I have begun Chapter 3, taking him further into meeting his needs, Sir.
Littledickslave@yahoo.com
7/19/24, 2:30 PM
Thanks William.P. Glad you like it. Chapter 2 is now up. Hopefully it adds to your enjoyment, Sir.
Mike Hammond
8/18/19, 2:52 PM
In real life Jeff is a cruel man because he is notorious top on screen. :) One of my favourite sex fantasies is big-dicked guys as bottom, like Jeff and other porn stars like Ken Ryker, Ryan Chandler, Rick Donovan, Lito Cruz, Rocco Steele and many others.

7/19/24, 2:04 PM
@Mike Hammond yes, a top forced into being bottom taking it. hard rough. is so hot
Anonymous
12/29/20, 11:24 AM
hot story. love when a top gets turned into a slutty pussy bitch bottom. To bad you didn't make him wear pink lace panties in the porn, so his big dick could be seen tenting the panties out as the lace thong rides deep in his ass teasing his pussy. then have a scene were he gets the cum fuck'd out of him and blows his load into the panties. the panties are soaked, and he's made to take them off and lick his load out of em.

7/19/24, 2:03 PM
@Anonymous now thats a good story line. too
Anon
7/19/24, 12:09 PM
@Pcm It's alright. Now that I think about it- I can kind of see allusions to what you mention regarding Tristan in chapter 2 and 3. Somewhat at least. The abyssal gaze...those are the fish folk, if I remember right. If so, I can see why you'd potentially avoid hydrokinesis for Leon- but he likely I presume will have some affinity for cleanliness or the agents of it (water in some form perhaps, though not like those of the abyss, or something else entirely). I think when it comes to magic, I tend to group anything that involves the unseen and not a physical action as being of it. The demons ability to induce mental changes so severely by sheer presence alone to me speak of that kind of unseen ability. It's not manipulating magical energy or the like, but in my eyes- a kind of sorcery nonetheless- though one moreso of the mind and body. Though like you've said- it's more physically based, and possibly biologically (though I could be wrong on the latter- that's me speculating.) I agree that Collin would likely only succumb only after being put through the wringer as you've mentioned. However, being the grandmasters pupil he likely was taught safeguards and knows ways to address and counter getting to that point. You've mentioned he finds self sacrifice appealing due to the real fear he has regarding demons and to stay human- he may well sacrifice himself to avoid hurting others if he feels he might transform. Garrett already noted that Collin is slowly killing himself due to using his powers too much- if it means keeping others safe, I can easily see Collin just accelerating that process to its end. He might also likely see becoming a demon as the destruction of the memory of his loved ones- only he knows now how they once were as human and family. He will likely strive to keep that alive- however that must happen. Not to mention, he will likely never give up his duty as a healer. Not to mention, he doesnt seem to have been tempted in the least by their sexual activities in this chapter unlike say william all the way back in chapter 1- instead finding them horrifying and violating. It's likely he won't be felled through such means.

Pcm
7/19/24, 1:42 PM
@Anon Will probably have tristan espouse his backstory again, I guess. With the demons, their power is a combination of biological and magical. Their musk and body fluid will induce a state of sexual euphoria and alters their victims biology. It is maybe magic maybe mundane situation. What makes demons in my work terrifying is their ability to affect people psychologically. Greg uses adrenal rush gatgered from battle, Fred uses his stench and food, and supposed that the Commander is turned, he will use water to alter induce someone into a state of euphoria somehow, but no, he would not have direct offensive capability with water magic. Collin is a cleric that much is certain. He really likes being a cleric. He would go back to being a cleric again if tge situation permits him. Unlike poor William, Collin is not exposed to Greg's corruptive ability and he still feels disgust at the notion of incest. If the demons were upon him, would he be able to resist their temptation now that he is exposed to their corruption outright?
Zander
7/19/24, 10:32 AM
Thank you very much for continuing this story. I hope the next chapter will come out as soon as this one.
Anon
7/19/24, 1:40 AM
@Pcm Your mention about Tristan's past life before Frederick does shed a lot of light as to why he is the way he is now. For him, his prior skinny body is likely a reminder of the abuse and poverty he had to face, much like how Henrich discarded his old name as it reminded him of his time being horribly ill and unable to be with his family. Leon will be interesting because cleanliness is often associated with purification in most contexts. It would likely be very difficult for them to try to figure out how to corrupt that. Excessive showering or steaming might be a way but...I'm trying to puzzle out how that would work. It's not like this could turn into showers of ejaculate, as that would contradict Leon's desire for cleanliness and relaxation. Sex tends to be a rather strenuous activity....I mean unless he become some kind of gentle sex prodigy that can blow people's minds with hydrokinesis (control of water) or something. As for self-sacrifice, it is very realistic that Collin would feel that way, and frankly I can see the grandmaster spiraling down that way too, but you've mentioned how that goes about might be very different. I think that for Collin to get corrupted, he won't be seduced by familial ties like William was, or just the lustful aspects of it. He'd likely only succumb in order to save somebody else, and even then he'd fight tooth and nail to avoid that and save anybody from the demons. They might be his family, but Collin knows duty- he was the grandmaster's pupil- he might be softer towards those who are turned, but I don't take him to be a pushover who will break at a moment's notice. I look forward to the later chapters, as well as the return to the east with Eddie. Seeing him in Wolfheim after all this time, and seeing Wolfheim again will be intriguing. I'm guessing it will be a covert operation he's going to get up to. However you go about about things, I'm eager to see how this goes. You've created a very rich world here, and I find myself pondering over it's dynamics any time I read it. And if we end the story from the king's perspective, I wonder if it's the king we see here somehow managing to stay human or being turned (he seems a nice man- but this is also probably the guy who got with Gil's daughter and caused a bit of a disaster that way so...mixed bag there...or gregory after having deposed him and having to man the kingdom. Who knows. Either way, I look forward to what comes next.

Pcm
7/19/24, 10:23 AM
@[Anon](/user/show/10049352) Yeah, his backstory was not well laid out in last chapter. My fault. I will most likely not give Leon hydrokinesis as that is mainly the Abyssal Gaze thing. Demons' power also usually does not come from magical power, but brute strength and corruptive presence that obstructs critical thinking and perverts the will to fight and retaliate into sexual desire to fuck and be fucked. Collin, being naturally gifted with purification, will be much harder to corrupt, espexially with the mindset ingrained in him. A demon will have to exhaust hcompletely im physically, mentally, emotionally, and sexually before they could even come a bit close to corrupting him. As always, thabk you for reading!
7/18/24, 1:38 AM
So so so so so so SO FREAKING GOOD!! My favorite chapter yet. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

7/18/24, 2:03 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Aww! I'm so glad to hear that! You also managed to time your comment just as I sent the 'last' chapter off for checking, so not long now on that. (Small disclaimer: I couldn't fit everything into the next chapter either, so there'll be an epilogue with a look at life after what's still to come,...)

Anonymous
7/19/24, 2:04 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) > Small disclaimer: I couldn’t fit everything into the next chapter either Why am I not surprised... :laughing:

7/19/24, 9:30 AM
@Anonymous :shushing_face: I don't have a problem! I could stop any time I want! Just,... not right now :p
7/19/24, 7:40 AM
Very hot 🔥🔥. Looking forward to seeing how much further his submission goes