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7/18/24, 5:18 PM
Bought the book. Can’t wait for the sequel!

7/19/24, 5:56 PM
@[rojohber](/user/show/149379) Thanks, bud! Feel free to share what parts/characters you like - helps me with story development. ;)

7/19/24, 6:00 PM
@[Colin DV](/user/show/10038060) Oh fuck yeah. Well, I love the whole concept of “role reversal” and “small Dom big sub” kinda vibes. The idea that fucking is a normal kinda form of payment; that it’s not supposed to be enjoyed; that this big “powerful” man is supposed to hate it, but ends up enjoying it, and actually loves it and deeply wants that and is both kinda confident with it yet still bothered by it. That he still asks for the 2 coin in payment!! Hah! (And later in your book - the idea of “creating” what kinda feels like a thrall or otherwise slave / submissive figure - and it’s this hot jocky dad with a personality that’s way more powerful than you (in some sense)??? Fucking hot. Love it. Cherish it.
mic
7/19/24, 5:42 PM
love it, more chasity, shrink invert him, more guys should use him deepthroat, great work
Anonymous
7/19/24, 3:41 PM
Still hoping for a part 2. I hope we can hear about Brandon's feelings as he slowly transforms into a perfect slut and various classmates start to use him. The pendant could even make straight classmates lust after his bottom.
Anonymous
7/19/24, 3:36 PM
hell yeah, so hot and bothered for more
Littledickslave@yahoo.com
7/19/24, 2:33 PM
I am pleased you are enjoying it, U.K.guy. I have begun Chapter 3, taking him further into meeting his needs, Sir.
Littledickslave@yahoo.com
7/19/24, 2:30 PM
Thanks William.P. Glad you like it. Chapter 2 is now up. Hopefully it adds to your enjoyment, Sir.
Mike Hammond
8/18/19, 2:52 PM
In real life Jeff is a cruel man because he is notorious top on screen. :) One of my favourite sex fantasies is big-dicked guys as bottom, like Jeff and other porn stars like Ken Ryker, Ryan Chandler, Rick Donovan, Lito Cruz, Rocco Steele and many others.

7/19/24, 2:04 PM
@Mike Hammond yes, a top forced into being bottom taking it. hard rough. is so hot
Anonymous
12/29/20, 11:24 AM
hot story. love when a top gets turned into a slutty pussy bitch bottom. To bad you didn't make him wear pink lace panties in the porn, so his big dick could be seen tenting the panties out as the lace thong rides deep in his ass teasing his pussy. then have a scene were he gets the cum fuck'd out of him and blows his load into the panties. the panties are soaked, and he's made to take them off and lick his load out of em.

7/19/24, 2:03 PM
@Anonymous now thats a good story line. too
Anon
7/19/24, 12:09 PM
@Pcm It's alright. Now that I think about it- I can kind of see allusions to what you mention regarding Tristan in chapter 2 and 3. Somewhat at least. The abyssal gaze...those are the fish folk, if I remember right. If so, I can see why you'd potentially avoid hydrokinesis for Leon- but he likely I presume will have some affinity for cleanliness or the agents of it (water in some form perhaps, though not like those of the abyss, or something else entirely). I think when it comes to magic, I tend to group anything that involves the unseen and not a physical action as being of it. The demons ability to induce mental changes so severely by sheer presence alone to me speak of that kind of unseen ability. It's not manipulating magical energy or the like, but in my eyes- a kind of sorcery nonetheless- though one moreso of the mind and body. Though like you've said- it's more physically based, and possibly biologically (though I could be wrong on the latter- that's me speculating.) I agree that Collin would likely only succumb only after being put through the wringer as you've mentioned. However, being the grandmasters pupil he likely was taught safeguards and knows ways to address and counter getting to that point. You've mentioned he finds self sacrifice appealing due to the real fear he has regarding demons and to stay human- he may well sacrifice himself to avoid hurting others if he feels he might transform. Garrett already noted that Collin is slowly killing himself due to using his powers too much- if it means keeping others safe, I can easily see Collin just accelerating that process to its end. He might also likely see becoming a demon as the destruction of the memory of his loved ones- only he knows now how they once were as human and family. He will likely strive to keep that alive- however that must happen. Not to mention, he will likely never give up his duty as a healer. Not to mention, he doesnt seem to have been tempted in the least by their sexual activities in this chapter unlike say william all the way back in chapter 1- instead finding them horrifying and violating. It's likely he won't be felled through such means.

Pcm
7/19/24, 1:42 PM
@Anon Will probably have tristan espouse his backstory again, I guess. With the demons, their power is a combination of biological and magical. Their musk and body fluid will induce a state of sexual euphoria and alters their victims biology. It is maybe magic maybe mundane situation. What makes demons in my work terrifying is their ability to affect people psychologically. Greg uses adrenal rush gatgered from battle, Fred uses his stench and food, and supposed that the Commander is turned, he will use water to alter induce someone into a state of euphoria somehow, but no, he would not have direct offensive capability with water magic. Collin is a cleric that much is certain. He really likes being a cleric. He would go back to being a cleric again if tge situation permits him. Unlike poor William, Collin is not exposed to Greg's corruptive ability and he still feels disgust at the notion of incest. If the demons were upon him, would he be able to resist their temptation now that he is exposed to their corruption outright?
Zander
7/19/24, 10:32 AM
Thank you very much for continuing this story. I hope the next chapter will come out as soon as this one.