Recent Comments

7/17/24, 4:08 PM
Ah, wonderful writing. I could smell the Captain's sweaty pits and feet and taste the hot piss...Foxy's story shows corruption at its best..but there's a niggling thought..if Captain has hypnotised the other three and has plenty of hypnotic gas left what future might he have in mind for them...or for any army boys he might want to bring into service...mmmm

7/18/24, 9:15 AM
@[DriftingScot](/user/show/10019099) Yes. One of the themes for the next chapter will be that the Captain needs new test subjects and where better to start than the friends who are already in on the action. Of course they may object but some of the Captain's army chums can be used as muscle to prevent them escaping or disrupting the process
Jul 14, 2024
7/17/24, 4:44 PM
I first read this on mcstories and loved it there so glad it’s here so I comment and let you know how great it is.

7/18/24, 5:20 AM
@[PJ34](/user/show/2558338) Thanks! I'm really glad you appreciated it!
7/17/24, 11:07 AM
I really loved that series! Thank you!

7/17/24, 9:33 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Delighted you enjoyed, and thank you for the comment. Now does anyone know someone to make this happen? :wink:

7/18/24, 4:57 AM
@[edhypnofan](/user/show/10002490) I'd be among the volunteers in no time!
Muscle-Flex
7/18/24, 4:09 AM
Oh man, this chapter was excellent! George's resistance was really hot.
Muscle-Flex
7/18/24, 3:58 AM
Dan's in a tight spot! Looking forward to what happens next. I love that he kind of knows what's going on, but is helpless to do anything about it.
7/18/24, 1:53 AM
What a nice beginning to a hot story!
JX
7/18/24, 1:43 AM
Love this chapter! I am really looking forward to the fun things Dexter will do to his slaves, especially to Philip Sr.
Anonymous
7/18/24, 1:37 AM
Chapter 4?
Feb 4, 2023
7/18/24, 12:36 AM
Thinking I need to make an appointment. Giggles hahaha
7/18/24, 12:14 AM
Truly a delightful story. Loving it