Recent Comments

Mindwhisperer
7/16/24, 6:07 PM
Learning that you are not planning to continue this story was very _**disappointing**_. I hope you change your mind.
7/16/24, 11:40 AM
This story was the best i have read. I love it. I want to read more and more of your erotic fiction. Damien ... i have a crush on that sexy man. Honestly, i think you should continue to write hypnosis stories and ... Personally, i have lots of interest in pheromone and sexy men smells - and hypnosis. so, if you dont mind, write ME another wonderful story! HA ... I loved it and want to encourage you to continue!

7/16/24, 5:55 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thank you. Most kind! I’ll need a bit of time to come up with a fresh set of ideas for something. Smells aren’t quite my thing but maybe I can fit that in for those that like it :wink:
Anonymous
7/16/24, 11:17 AM
I hope at least Eddie and Collin have a happy ending . And collin to reunite with his family. It woul be fun to see them discover that collin has a boyfriend

7/16/24, 1:00 PM
@Anonymous agreed

Pcm
7/16/24, 1:08 PM
@Anonymous Yeah. Gregory may be a demon now, but he's still a father. Eddie will have to experience what every boyfriend goes through first time meeting his partner's family. He will be grilled (not literally)!

7/16/24, 1:38 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) hopefully he won't be corrupted during or after it

Anonymous
7/16/24, 2:46 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) It would be pretty funny and cute if Gregory was like " treat my son well and if you break his heart I will make you wish you never been born."

Pcm
7/16/24, 3:53 PM
@Anonymous While William and Frederic stand cross-arms behind, ready to jump in once Eddie makes a single wrong move. Collin will facepalm himself with how adorably protective his family is being, and slightly sorry for Eddie.
Anonymous
7/16/24, 3:20 PM
This is so hot! I hope we get another chapter
7/16/24, 1:58 PM
What a surprisingly wholesome story, I'm definitely curious to see where this one will go, an excellent job all around, I really see the potential here!
7/16/24, 8:01 AM
Was so happy to see this story continue. And wow, the plot twist of Laurent at the end….i can only imagine what kind of deal could be reach

7/16/24, 1:35 PM
@[SabastionStorm](/user/show/910642) Glad you enjoyed it!
7/16/24, 12:26 PM
Oh my... I simply NEED to read the next chapters! This is so extremely promising!
7/14/24, 5:46 PM
This series is great. Very well written, great attention to detail, and the concept is totally hot. I enjoyed both the previous chapters very much, and I love the setup here for a potential future conflict. It’s a shame that you don’t feel like you’ll get more chapters in before the close of the competition, but I hope you do continue the series later. I’m dying to see where you go with this. You’re hitting all the right vibes. And your writing style feels familiar, but maybe I’m imagining it. Either way: A+, gold star, 10 points for Gryffindor, take a cookie, etc, etc. :star_struck:

7/16/24, 12:19 PM
@[Perpetually Erect](/user/show/10018717) Your praise is way better than I could ever write it myself. I simply want to repeat everything you've just written!
7/16/24, 9:27 AM
Love this chapter, great work as always on this story!

7/16/24, 11:08 AM
@[RedRabbit206](/user/show/10038996) Thank you so so much for your comment and message!!! Glad you enjoyed it!
7/16/24, 10:18 AM
welcome back, and oh snap, that ending

Pcm
7/16/24, 10:21 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Glad to be back! Hope you like Leon's character, the next chapter will mostly focus on him.

7/16/24, 10:24 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) nice, I wonder what his ecess will be, as i remember you saying the demons are all based on some kind of ecess or overindulgance

Pcm
7/16/24, 10:32 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Yeah, it's a sub-theme. The corruption exacerbates their tendencies for hedonistic pursuit; those things they like or want to indulge in as a human and use it to pervert their bodies. What do you think is Leon's favourite pasttime?

7/16/24, 10:33 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I do want to know, if you don't mind

Pcm
7/16/24, 10:35 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Since it's gonna be put in next chapter's summary anyway, I suppose that there's no harm spoiling a little. Bathing.

7/16/24, 10:38 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) so, he and his converts will indulge in Cum baths? good choice

Pcm
7/16/24, 10:45 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) We'll see...

7/16/24, 10:46 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) good point, still, I hope the next chapter will be as good as this one