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7/16/24, 9:27 AM
Love this chapter, great work as always on this story!

7/16/24, 11:08 AM
@[RedRabbit206](/user/show/10038996) Thank you so so much for your comment and message!!! Glad you enjoyed it!
7/16/24, 10:18 AM
welcome back, and oh snap, that ending

Pcm
7/16/24, 10:21 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Glad to be back! Hope you like Leon's character, the next chapter will mostly focus on him.

7/16/24, 10:24 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) nice, I wonder what his ecess will be, as i remember you saying the demons are all based on some kind of ecess or overindulgance

Pcm
7/16/24, 10:32 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Yeah, it's a sub-theme. The corruption exacerbates their tendencies for hedonistic pursuit; those things they like or want to indulge in as a human and use it to pervert their bodies. What do you think is Leon's favourite pasttime?

7/16/24, 10:33 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I do want to know, if you don't mind

Pcm
7/16/24, 10:35 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Since it's gonna be put in next chapter's summary anyway, I suppose that there's no harm spoiling a little. Bathing.

7/16/24, 10:38 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) so, he and his converts will indulge in Cum baths? good choice

Pcm
7/16/24, 10:45 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) We'll see...

7/16/24, 10:46 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) good point, still, I hope the next chapter will be as good as this one
7/16/24, 8:46 AM
Ha! Oh that was brilliant. Yet more plot complications for the drones to try to contain.
4/21/24, 9:46 PM
Superior writing and story. Encore!

7/16/24, 8:26 AM
@[Triskelion](/user/show/18153) Thank you for the endorsement. The next series I have published is called Manhunt (first chapter) and What happens in the Ice House (part two), there's a third act to follow that I am starting on today.
2/18/24, 1:32 AM
This was hot. Very well written

7/16/24, 8:24 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks for your kind words. There's a bit more musk in part two of my latest series, Manhunt, the chapter is entitled 'What happens in the Ice House', and I think you may enjoy it
7/15/24, 2:36 PM
If there is a Part III, I expect Gregory to be joined by an equally buff, smooth, muscular, lycra-clad Nicholas. Nicholas might be a bleach blond - for daddy.

Willie Cici
7/16/24, 3:27 AM
@[Sub4Taylor](/user/show/2656113) I hate to tell you this: there is no Part III. That's the end of the story. Sorry.

7/16/24, 5:54 AM
@Willie Cici Are you absolutely sure? The good doctor was annoyed at the attention Nick gave Gregory. It feels only right that “Nicholas” also discovers “what he wants” - muscles, hairlessness, lycra clothing and to join “team fag”. With the right AI photo, the next installment almost writes itself!
Anonymous
7/15/24, 11:28 AM
This one was reallyyyy good dude! Thrilled to see where it goes!

7/16/24, 5:37 AM
@Anonymous Thanks so much! Wanted to focus more on the storyline dynamics with this one instead of just pure sexualization, and I think it paid off! Made it much hotter in the end lol. Thanks for reading <3
7/16/24, 5:28 AM
Great story!
7/15/24, 8:44 AM
I take my previous comment back. Knight most definitely doesn't help his clients. Also, did I stop in the middle of reading to see if State v. Johnson is a real case? Yes I did. Was I delighted to find that it is? Oh yes I was. Before reaching the time skip I thought there's going to be a twist and we'll find out that Greg had recorded this meeting in which Knight confesses tampering with the witnesses and at the same time laying the foundation for disqualifying Greg as a witness on the basis of him being hypnotized. While it is true that Knight cannot be indicted for the sex crime themselves, he can be indicted for obstruction of justice... Okay, I may have gone too deep on that. Anyway, do you have some legal knowledge, if I may ask? Pulling out this the SvJ case is not a trivial matter. Anyway, I'm curious to see what happens next. I have an inkling that Nick will save Greg from Knight only to take control of him himself. P.S. "You’re an educated man. Allegedly intelligent". That was savagely wonderful.

Willie Cici
7/16/24, 3:26 AM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) State v. Johnson is a "lawyer joke". When a lawyer is asked, "Can you cite a case to support your position?", then answer is "I'm sure there's a State v. Johnson on point."
7/16/24, 1:59 AM
Is that a plot I detect? Very exciting, looking forward to the next part! I'm definitely a fan of the world building you're doing, it's quite intriguing :)