Recent Comments

7/16/24, 8:01 AM
Was so happy to see this story continue. And wow, the plot twist of Laurent at the end….i can only imagine what kind of deal could be reach

7/16/24, 1:35 PM
@[SabastionStorm](/user/show/910642) Glad you enjoyed it!
7/16/24, 12:26 PM
Oh my... I simply NEED to read the next chapters! This is so extremely promising!
7/14/24, 5:46 PM
This series is great. Very well written, great attention to detail, and the concept is totally hot. I enjoyed both the previous chapters very much, and I love the setup here for a potential future conflict. It’s a shame that you don’t feel like you’ll get more chapters in before the close of the competition, but I hope you do continue the series later. I’m dying to see where you go with this. You’re hitting all the right vibes. And your writing style feels familiar, but maybe I’m imagining it. Either way: A+, gold star, 10 points for Gryffindor, take a cookie, etc, etc. :star_struck:

7/16/24, 12:19 PM
@[Perpetually Erect](/user/show/10018717) Your praise is way better than I could ever write it myself. I simply want to repeat everything you've just written!
7/16/24, 9:27 AM
Love this chapter, great work as always on this story!

7/16/24, 11:08 AM
@[RedRabbit206](/user/show/10038996) Thank you so so much for your comment and message!!! Glad you enjoyed it!
7/16/24, 10:18 AM
welcome back, and oh snap, that ending

Pcm
7/16/24, 10:21 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Glad to be back! Hope you like Leon's character, the next chapter will mostly focus on him.

7/16/24, 10:24 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) nice, I wonder what his ecess will be, as i remember you saying the demons are all based on some kind of ecess or overindulgance

Pcm
7/16/24, 10:32 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Yeah, it's a sub-theme. The corruption exacerbates their tendencies for hedonistic pursuit; those things they like or want to indulge in as a human and use it to pervert their bodies. What do you think is Leon's favourite pasttime?

7/16/24, 10:33 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I do want to know, if you don't mind

Pcm
7/16/24, 10:35 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Since it's gonna be put in next chapter's summary anyway, I suppose that there's no harm spoiling a little. Bathing.

7/16/24, 10:38 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) so, he and his converts will indulge in Cum baths? good choice

Pcm
7/16/24, 10:45 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) We'll see...

7/16/24, 10:46 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) good point, still, I hope the next chapter will be as good as this one
7/16/24, 8:46 AM
Ha! Oh that was brilliant. Yet more plot complications for the drones to try to contain.
4/21/24, 9:46 PM
Superior writing and story. Encore!

7/16/24, 8:26 AM
@[Triskelion](/user/show/18153) Thank you for the endorsement. The next series I have published is called Manhunt (first chapter) and What happens in the Ice House (part two), there's a third act to follow that I am starting on today.
2/18/24, 1:32 AM
This was hot. Very well written

7/16/24, 8:24 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks for your kind words. There's a bit more musk in part two of my latest series, Manhunt, the chapter is entitled 'What happens in the Ice House', and I think you may enjoy it
7/15/24, 2:36 PM
If there is a Part III, I expect Gregory to be joined by an equally buff, smooth, muscular, lycra-clad Nicholas. Nicholas might be a bleach blond - for daddy.

Willie Cici
7/16/24, 3:27 AM
@[Sub4Taylor](/user/show/2656113) I hate to tell you this: there is no Part III. That's the end of the story. Sorry.

7/16/24, 5:54 AM
@Willie Cici Are you absolutely sure? The good doctor was annoyed at the attention Nick gave Gregory. It feels only right that “Nicholas” also discovers “what he wants” - muscles, hairlessness, lycra clothing and to join “team fag”. With the right AI photo, the next installment almost writes itself!
Anonymous
7/15/24, 11:28 AM
This one was reallyyyy good dude! Thrilled to see where it goes!

7/16/24, 5:37 AM
@Anonymous Thanks so much! Wanted to focus more on the storyline dynamics with this one instead of just pure sexualization, and I think it paid off! Made it much hotter in the end lol. Thanks for reading <3