Recent Comments

7/14/24, 8:05 PM
Thank you for this series, I have really enjoyed working my way through your dark fantasies, and you saved the best for last (at least for me). I love the economy of your writing style and will look out for your future offerings

7/14/24, 9:44 PM
@[Whitechap_e1](/user/show/219792) Thank you! Hopefully wasn't too dark. I wanted it to be that the narrator was really enjoying it, whether more subconsciously or not!
7/14/24, 9:25 PM
I think this story is amazing. I love the awareness aspect and the fight, futile as it might have been. And I really hope you'll continue with that dronification - and please make Mich aware of every step so I can go along with him in that experience!
7/14/24, 9:25 PM
Preciso de um Ian na minha vida...adorei a história
Mar 16, 2024
7/14/24, 8:45 PM
adorei, quero ser o gimp desta história
7/14/24, 8:22 PM
adorei, muito obrigado, sinto inveja do Blake...
7/14/24, 8:08 PM
This is a great series. I absolutely love it.
Jul 14, 2024
7/14/24, 7:43 PM
Terrific story
7/14/24, 7:21 PM
Interesting story told in a novel way.
7/14/24, 6:24 PM
Your writing has such a great exciting energy to it. SO EXCITING. THank yOU> I love it.

7/14/24, 6:29 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it. Working on the next exciting chapter
6/30/24, 6:44 AM
I second texas95. I'm usually not into drone stories but this one's hitting all my buttons so far. Really fantastic work, and I'd love to see a progression as Alex either corrals all the drones into a big harem for himself or, well, this becomes a worldchange story. Also, was it intentional for the characters to have A, B, and C names? Alpha Alex, Beta Brody, Gamma Charlie.

7/1/24, 2:07 PM
@[Fred W. Kong](/user/show/476663) Yeah, the names thing was some fun I was having, but I feel like I have to go away from it soon, as it is fairly restricting instead of fun, and also the drones can change designation upon orders from an alpha/Prime. Like Charlie is now temporarily an Alpha unit to go collect William Cook, but he isn't changing his name to 'Arlie. ;)

7/3/24, 7:53 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Oh I can't believe I missed the name thing! I was trying to decipher the serial numbering system. If I understood it correctly, Silas is the third person to be converted, hence the 003. Then Connor was the 142nd person to be converted by Silas, thus 003-142. But if that is true, then that means that Brody is the second person to be converted by Connor, so who is the first one? Also, I wonder if there's a meaning to that both Alex's and Silas' SN share the same "section" (for a lack of a better word), since if I got it correctly, each generation is defined by a new section. Then again, I might be looking way too into that.

7/3/24, 8:12 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Unit-003-142-001 is William Cook, the focus of the next chapter. See here: > “Brody, stop. I got this,” Conner said. “Basically everyone in the fraternity, Sir. And three guys in Tau Epsilon Tau. And this cute guy in my History class; his name was William Cook, I think....He was my first convert, Prime, before even Brody. Not exactly sure what sure what you mean by "SN" or "section" here, but if you mean that Alex is Unit-001 and all his converts are Units-00X instead of Units-001-00X, there was no expectation that anyone other than Alex would be injected with nanos directly, so Alex and everyone he creates is a "first generation" drone, while every generation after marks their first gen progenitor. We shall see if that assumption is correct. What happens if there are two Unit-001s out there? Also, the next chapter is going to be the last one inside the contest window, but I do want to continue this concept. Anyone with suggestions on where the story might go is welcome to share. I have a rough idea of some things, but it's early enough that suggestions will definitely help shape the story. Plot suggestions, or what other drone designations do is all helpful. For example, what is a Delta unit? A Epsilon unit? Etc.

7/6/24, 5:22 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I really want to see the new designations be the different personae that Charlie detected in Alex's fantasies. Especially considering that the drones can transform their bodies over time, they could change to suit whatever new designation Alex creates to suit different purposes, like bottoming, fitting a stereotype, or gaining kink-related traits like inhuman body configurations or external features. As an event in the story, I would love to see Alex figure out how to link with the drones without speech, especially as the collective grows. Would his will continue to control all the others once networked, or would their collective devotion (and the nanites' desire to spread) overwhelm his self-control?

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7/14/24, 6:12 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I've loved reading about the one-on-one dynamics between the drones but I'd also be interested to see how Prime handles the converted frat boys and deals with an entire group of drones that want to serve him.