Recent Comments

7/15/24, 10:04 AM
loved this story. keep going !
7/13/24, 6:15 PM
Damn, I feel sorry for Nick, Connor, the choir friends, and the priests! They just want to pray after all! lol but then, how you showed their corruption is so satisfying. Excellent job!

7/15/24, 9:30 AM
@[PaladinJock](/user/show/10052351) Thank you!
Jul 14, 2024
7/15/24, 8:50 AM
Love it! The suggestions lasting past the end of the show are a nice extra bonus too!
7/15/24, 8:38 AM
HOTTTTT! This is high quality stuff right here! So happy you’re writing this. Love love love the gamma designation and all the personality that they have. And all the fun that we get to enjoy by also having Alpha Charlie’s POV. It’s everything I’ve wanted from ASFR.
Mark
7/15/24, 1:19 AM
Great chapter! Glad you are continuing this.

7/15/24, 7:29 AM
@Mark Thank you for dropping a message! It means a lot! Glad you enjoyed it
7/15/24, 5:03 AM
I loved this! I just wish the ending was a bit longer, so we could have seen more about the Dhruvification of the dorm.
7/15/24, 4:40 AM
Wow, this was extremely hot!
7/15/24, 4:37 AM
thinking of returning to this series. give me some suggestions for wishes!
Jul 14, 2024
Lavender Lad
7/14/24, 7:31 PM
It's so good seeing you post alot more frequently, you're one of the best writers on here! I also love that you're making the hypnotist character be a lot meaner and sadistic with his victims as well as giving them self serving suggestions, hope to see more of this soon

7/15/24, 4:01 AM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Thank you! I wish I could keep pounding stuff out endlessly but unfortunately life gets in the way. Always glad when I can shepherd another one across the finish line, though! Thanks for reading!
7/15/24, 3:12 AM
Wow! Another Star Rail fan! Love the premise. Gonna have fun reading through the rest of this series.