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7/13/24, 11:47 PM
Any chance this story could can come back?
7/13/24, 8:55 PM
A marvelous ending to a marvelous story! When I imagined the ending for Brian I didn't consider a genuine chance for a redemption arc, which makes me much more appreciative of your choice. It's uncommon in erotic stories, hell, it's uncommon in regular stories, so kudos to you. At the end I thought about that, on the macro, the A plot is Tyler and Javi vs Brian and slave Riley in battle of brains (and cock) for freedom, justice and love, while the B plot is Noah and Joe on a quest to make the world a better place by turning it into a global orgy. Of course it's more complicated than that, and definitely not a bad thing, but I just found it amusing and felt clever pointing it out. The only thing I felt missing from the plot is the restoration of the lives of to British folks who's lives Brian had destroyed because they dared existing. One last thing I would like to mention is that I really loved Javi's character development. He was always sweet and caring, but as he became more independent and sassy he became more fun and a "djin fatal". If you ever decide to do a spin off, I would definitely like to read about Javi travelling the world and serving some sexy wholesome justice.
Dec 31, 2018
rubberrobin
7/13/24, 8:54 PM
The story has improved
7/13/24, 7:09 PM
Neeeeeed more!! This is great thanks for sharing.

7/13/24, 8:45 PM
@[Furrybttm40](/user/show/10010813) Thank you. It means a lot. Glad you like it. More to come.
Anonymous
7/12/24, 3:02 PM
"I dont think this story needs a sequel" he says and proceeds to drop the biggest cliffhanger. ! This story was great from start to finish! Thank you for sharing it

7/12/24, 3:06 PM
@Anonymous Mwhahahahah! Perhaps *I* was the villain the whole time! But seriously, I said what I wanted to say via this story, so thematically it doesn't need a sequel. But I do hate closing off worlds. Every story goes ever onwards, and so does this one. I might return to it when inspiration hits. :)

Anonymous
7/12/24, 4:48 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) I hope inspiration will hit you some day. I want to see what happens to Brian and see the doctor get his just desserts!

7/13/24, 8:32 PM
@Anonymous Exactly!
MustObeyMuscle
7/13/24, 6:56 PM
Absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter. Excellent series. Thank you very much.
Anonymous
7/13/24, 3:38 PM
I. Love. This. More please!!!

7/13/24, 6:01 PM
@Anonymous Thank you - that means a lot. Truly. Another chapter is awaiting approval by the mod's.
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7/13/24, 5:11 PM
A tall, slim soldier named Reza, his head freshly shaved to a sandpaper-like buzz at a number 0, standing with a commanding presence in a disheveled space that suggests recent chaos. He is dressed in a shiny black shirt tucked into a pair of form-fitting low waisted tight blue jeans, cinched at the waist by a cowboy belt that highlights his narrow hips and pronounced bulge. The tension in the scene is palpable as Reza's pants are unzipped at the front, revealing his long, slender penis that stands erect and demanding. In front of him, kneeling eagerly, is a handsome boy with straight brown hair. The boy's eyes are locked onto Reza's, a silent agreement of desire and submission as he takes the soldier's manhood into his mouth, his full lips wrapping around the shaft with a hunger that speaks of his need to please. The contrast between the harshness of Reza's freshly shaved head and the softness of the boy's hair is stark, as Reza's strong, calloused hands glide through the youth's locks, guiding the rhythm of the blowjob. Meanwhile, a plump, middle-aged Afghan man with a thick beard has stumbled upon the intimate scene. His eyes widen with lust, his own hand surreptitiously disappearing into his trousers as he watches the erotic display. Unseen by the others, he has positioned himself behind Reza and has slipped his hand under the soldier's pants to gently massage his testicles, adding an unexpected layer of sensation. Despite the intrusion, the intensity of the moment does not waver; instead, it seems to fuel the passion between the two. The image captures the raw, carnally driven unity of the trio, the fat man's furtive touch blending with the soft suckling of the boy's mouth, all building to an inevitable crescendo of pleasure that leaves Reza trembling with release, the boy's mouth filled with the warmth of his climax, as the intruder reaches his own peak in silent, voyeuristic ecstasy.
7/13/24, 5:02 PM
This was extremely hot! A repeat read for sure!
7/13/24, 5:00 PM
What a delight to have been able to read this -- thanks so much Naedre!